title: desires of an underpug or rags and riches?

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Cool style. i just don't get all of the speech bubbles. especially the fire hydrant one. is the pug talking about his disappointments? Also, the heart behind the greyhound sort of looks like a fart. maybe place it in front of the dog?

Thanks Laura! I'm going to have a look at the finished Roach Motel later on! :)

Bio-bot 9000: Underpug wants to famous in the dog world and pee on every street corner, hydrant and everywhere. he wants to be the new smell in town. It is about dominion. The heart fart is placed there on purpose because dogs just love a lovely smelling butt! If a lot of people have a problem with that I'm going to change it though I would like to keep it that way. :)

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made some small changes.

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this is awesome! love everything about it: the colors, the style, the composition and especially the battered shoe in the foreground. i'd sub it :)



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and check out the "Ancient Geeks".

Thanks bengineer! I really like Ancient Geeks! Good Luck with the Loves!

I really love the colors. I might play with the composition or add a bit of text as it took me a second to recognize the concept. At first, I tried to read it like a comic, not realizing that I wasn't meant to. But maybe that's just me. Please take a look at mine if you get a chance.

This is cool! :) Submit it... :)



And, check out mine, I could use some feedback:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/52725/Even_geeks_can_be_trendy

Thank you!

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This is soooo great!

I love the textures and bckgd!

Maybe put the shoe in another comic case??



Can you comment and / or vote for my design??

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What's it look like on a shirt? Your colors and patterns are fantastic, great choices! My only thought is that the space above the pug's head looks empty, especially since your other panels are so full. Hmm...I can't come up with any suggestions of what to put there, sorry to be no help!



And the only thing cuter than the look on that pug's face is the word "underpug". Go with it!

really enjoy it! submit!!



My Design

Thanks for your comments!

@ donlope1 Maybe put the shoe in another comic case??

I didn't want the design to look boxy on the shirt. The shoe outside a comic panel breaks up the shape.

@ 8bitcat My only thought is that the space above the pug's head looks empty In contrast to the rest of the panels the pug's life is supposed to be empty. I tried a scratched texture and writings on the wall but liked it better bare. If you think it is cuter I'll keep the underpug in the title.

Gonna post a mock-up later on.

Thanks :)

@ 8bitcat I really like your pending Ghost of the Miner! :)

title: desires of an underpug or rags and riches?


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Testing the Flash-file.

you need to work in some text like some one else said, or find a way to move people through the image. as it is now, It reads more of a fail from grace, because most people read something from top to bottom.

Nice idea and imagery though.



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i like the design - but not a grey shirt - other than that i would say 'submit it'

Thanky for the commenst! It is already pending.

Nice work, drop me a line and I'll defiantly vote :) Love the whippet too :)

wow 339 days later... yeah..... wow xD