Hello everybody!

Here is the first submission for an idea I had: let's design the key to the nature.

Any comments, critiques, idea on how to make this better are welcome!

Thank you all!

Thank you for your comment.

I did the rough edges on purpose, to try it. But indeed, i may change that.



Any other critiques?

I agree with the rough edges. Also, I'd like to see it on a shirt to see how it relates size wise. Really cool idea. ^^



Can you critique mine too?

I'm loving this in general, but don't really like the big horizontal green chunk. Maybe continue across with more chunks similar to the ones behind the trees? Comments on mine would be appreciated: http://www.threadless.com/critique/52337/musical_cats

I agree with the rough edges. Also, I'd like to see it on a shirt to see how it relates size wise. Really cool idea. ^^



Can you critique mine too?

Well, this is a sacond try, without the sharp edges (since there are no foms anymore :)).

I aslo change colours.

Please tell me what you think of it!

I really like this! especially the texture you create in the splatters. it actually looks 'leavy'. the birdies gets a little lost tho. I dont know if it from the background color the splatter?



btw thanks for your helpful comments on my design!

OK thanks for the advice, I will work on that.

The texture of the splatters gives a more natual feel to the overall design. I like this version!

Hey there- this is really interesting! I wonder though if there's a way to mute down the harshness of the silhouette. Right now the black takes up a lot of real estate on the page, maybe some sort of graphical embellishments/flourishes?

nice!

i think it would look better if the huge tree on the far right was a little smaller



let me know what i should work on

Nicely done. I really like this piece.

visually interesting, but i don't understand the point. is there a reference i'm not catching?



it may just be the loss of quality in saving as a .jpg, but a lot of edges look too pixelated.



i would appreciate your feedback on mine.

I like the concept and the use of textures. Try making the key itself a little more ornate.



What I'd like to see is a keyhole with a glimpse of a great big, grand-looking woodland landscape inside it. Or perhaps a desert landscape, or that the "key" is unlocking "life in the desert"? Just a thought.



Critique: Boogeyman Wants His Mommy

Well, thank you all, very cool ideas there and useful critiques!

I was already thinking of putting a keyhole, but had problems with its placement...I don't know where to put it so that it doesn't look like two different drawings.

Nice picture! I think the key should be the second thing to see, not pop out immediately.

You mean try to make it look a bit more vegetal? have its shape made roughly with natural elements?

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bump bump :)

I like it, go for it!

I also agree with making the key more ornate. ALso, I'd like to see the splatters just a tad bit bigger. Right now to me it feels like they're just there. ^^ Thx on the comment.

Very cleaver, me like them siluettes =)

But i'm not feeling that bakground, give the key and birds more space, maybe the bakground could use the loxer half of the design?



Check out mine

I like the key very much... But 'm not sure about the background...



And if you be so kind to comment mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/52725/Even_geeks_can_be_trendy

i love it! the silhouette looks wicked and stands out!

have you tried different colour shirts?

SUBMIT :)



comment mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/52129/Bin_Better

http://www.threadless.com/critique/51768/Everyone_Knows_One

Much improved! Love the colors, I feel like it needs a lil' something extra, like it's openbing something or about to, to take it to the next level

Hey I like this... I agree with Ivan on this one... see if you can push it to the next level... also, this looks like it wold do well on a similar site if not printed here. Keep it up.

Thank you for the comments, I'm working on it right now.

Just some thoughts - maybe it would be more key like at first glance if there was a tad more space between the tree bunches?

I feel like once you know what it is, you can't NOT see the key, but there was a comment earlier about it.



Maybe there could be another dark color other than black for the key as well?



Sort of grasping at straws for criticisms but I felt it was owed since you commented on mine. I like it as is!

Thank you any comments are welcome and I will give a try to your suggestions?

Hee Donlope, how is it going with the design, waiting for your next version!



BTW my Global Love you critiqued is up for scoring :-)

i think that the tree it's too big...



critique mine ;-)

i like it but it looks pixelated smooth is out and your good

comment on mine please!!!