The idea came to me finding a spider in my shirt. I have to figure out if it is possible to also print some lines of the web on the sleeve area, would be cool to extend the web there...

what you think about the print and shirt combi?

Any other ideas / suggestions are very welcome!

i like this best on gray. and i love the added bug. maybe a bug or two caught in the web? not sure it that would be too much or not. but you could try it out.

I would try making the web more circular. I think it would look better than the straight lines. Looks best on grey though.



Comment on mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/52032/Blue_Notion

I think it might benefit the shirt if you decreased the size of the web (still let it cross on the sleeves, I like that) and edge the fly down a little lower. Also, possibly try different kinds of bugs. I know I'd be a lot more reactive if it were a lady bug that was about to be dinner.



A comment and a score would be lovely

Funny that you say that, the lady bug was one of my first ideas!

I like this better on the grey background. I think the web should continue on the sleeve though.



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that's awesome!!!



I'd buy any of them!

Does anyone has know if it is possible to print this width and height or is it too big?

appreciate your input on mine.



looks good, but not a fan of the idea. but i'm pretty biased as i don't like bugs and anything bug-like grosses me out.

cool idea, gonna do some sketching, thanks!

I like simple line drawings, so I like this. I think it will be funny if the giant spider is preying on spider man (just the shape though). And I think the web can extend down a little more on the left side. Thx for commenting mine.

Ahahaha, this is cute. I would have to say I like the red and charcoal shirts the best. And maybe rework the prey? It took me a little bit to figure out what it was. But maybe that was just me being retarded. Lol.



Also, I'd really appreciate it if you could rate and comment on my critique:



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Thanks!

The design looks best on gray, but I agree a lady bug would be cool, especially if that was all that had color! Also the web is a bit blocky. Thanks for the feedback on mine as well. Good luck!

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I like this design. I do agree that the spiderweb is a little too straight. Rounding it off will look better.



For me black shirt is my fave!

Nice idea! I'd work more with the scale of the web, maybe reducing it slightly and giving the web more of a curved edge. It may then balance things out with the more detailed spider silhouettes.



Thanks for commenting on my first submission!

Does it absolutely need the web?

cool i love it - good work - chek mine out whan you have time - thank you :)

this is a great idea, i like the red shirt over the black, the only thing i might do is have the spider more to the right and the fly lower down but in the same vertical line.



i'd wear this!

I changed some stuff, made the lines of the web 'rounded', and made the lines of the web thinner. Also tried to make the fly a bit less detailed and placed it as low as possible on the shirt. Some thing to consider:

- fly or ladybird or....

Any other ideas / suggestions are very welcome!

i love it i'd buy it 2 day! man tis is good work! :)

it's a bit gothy for my taste, but really like the clean style. would maybe make the fly a little bigger, just for clarity. otherwise wouldn't fiddle too much. like the light grey combo

it's amazing! submit it please!

I like the placement and colors. I think it would look fine without the fly though.

I like it a lot, especially the red on black version. I'd love to see the shirt printed. Thanks for the crit too.

I like the red on black. Have you tried the web in white or glo? I think the fly will get lost when worn.

I like the red version :)

Maybe add some kind of insect in the web as well?

Instead of having the fly at the bottom, just put a few flies in the web. It looks good though.



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i have to disagree with Almar20 here . . . I'd either leave it exactly the way it is, or just nix the fly.



either way I'd buy this in a heartbeat (any of the 3, though preferably black on red)! let me know when you submit and I'll definitely $5 it!!!

love it! great work on the spider. really looks like hes coming after that fly

oh, and if you have a chance, check out my idea for the "threadless loves GEEKS"



http://www.threadless.com/critique/52281/sports_geek

looks good, I wouldn't fiddle around with it too much any more, I see alot that have a lot going on in them sometimes in the running, but this one is fine right where it is; not too much, not too little.

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leave it exactly as it is. if people don't see the fly its their loss, but nothing is gained by scrappping it. i think it would ruin your web to have flies in it. i really like the red



love it. keep it exactly as it is



please critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/51991/Geek_Love

that is cool, maybe the web takes a bit too much place for my taste but the spider and the food are dead on.



nad thanks for your comment on my work :P

Hi Guys, the final design i want to submit, added a glow in the dark version. Thanks for all your critique and comments. Hope you want to give it a nice score, so it will be printed!

thanks!!!!

Hey, love this design, but maybe make the lines taper at the ends. That might screw up the style and the glow in the dark ink, though...