I'm not crazy about this one...

One I did with a tablet.... PLEASE COMMENT!!!

Perhaps you should make the top bigger so it looks more like mushroom cloud.

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/146/412116605_dc284f3c5a_o.jpg

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it kind of looks like a big tree (which is the point). make it more like the bomb, make the top part of the tree more like a mushroom. i like this one better than the first one though

I liked the first version better. On the second, maybe if the trunk wasn't so thick...

^you LIKED the first?

So.... I already submitted the previous version and have this one ready to go as soon as it finishes scoring.

haha neat! I think the top could still be much bigger, and the lower ring should be closer to the ground. Maybe the whole thing needs to be shorter... hmm



The blue looks like something from Dr Seuss

Well, similarities aside, I think the whole atomic bomb thing is pretty clear. And if it was shorter, the placement that I have in mind would be sort of akward.

Also, whenever I look at the smaller pictures, it seems clearer. I guess it could be one of those optical illusions. Whenever a person gets close to the shirt it looks more like a tree. Farther away: an atomic explosion.

Do you like the blue?

I agree with karnstead. Blue looks like Dr. Seuss. Maybe if you chose a different shade of yellow, or replace the yellow altogether. I still like tangerine best though!



I think the top needs to be wider too.

I don't think the clouds in the background are necessary. Everything else is fine though.