This is a shirt for people who still believe in things. Like Ogo Pogo, the Sasquatch, Peace, and Love.

i like this even without the text.

I think that the nessy is nice, but If you were to keep the type on t here that it should be worked alitte. The kerning could be raised for better legibility especially from a distance.

good idea man, maybe even a different font?

yea a different typeface as well could improve it, maybe something with a wider body, stick with the sans serif type.

maybe if you spelled "i still belive in things" with different fairy tale characters and monsters...things kids believe in like santa claus

it just doesnt seem very developed yet

errr, argh!

I love the little nessie thing

(and your note bit is awesome, "peace and love."



maybe add another monster thing? like a fairie or something?

I was thinking of putting some mystical beast on the beast, like a sasquatch riding it or something.

1 other quick question, I was using half tones does that count as a color... so was I was I using 3 colors or... 5? If it's three I have some great ideas as to what to do with the other 2.

i like this, it's nice

i like the idea of having a sasquatch or like, a unicorn or something on the back. adds a lil more to the design, which at this point, is still kinda simple.

i like the idea of having a sasquatch or like, a unicorn or something on the back. adds a lil more to the design, which at this point, is still kinda simple.

can anyone help me out with some more ideas...



I've added a Unicorn, a gnome, a fairy, and I'm working on the easter bunny (the sasquatch is proving hard to draw)

I think I need to make it smaller on the shirt, and add 1 more mystical creature.

Im not too sure about the suff on the nessies head...looks like snow or something. But some fairies would look kool flying around. The space between the top of the type and the bottom of the image needs fixing, proximity to close.

should i make the 2 middle humps of the sea beast into a heart?

I actually like the original better, but I like the direction you're heading with version 2 as well. Can Nessie have a smile, too, since everyone else does?

added a few more "things" what do you all think?

anything?

The location of the mermaid makes it appear that Nessie's tail is hers, which is a bit awkward. Also the gray scale things on Nessie don't look right to me -- they seem to clutter the presentation.

I'll offer a version without the "scales" for this critique, also I could move the mermaid to the left of nessie's neck

Without the scales it looks so bad (more like a snake) they also look almost whimsically cloud like which adds to the whole "believing" idea.

I don't really like the text at all...the fact that it says "things" makes me feel weird

I liked it best in its simplest form...just nessie, but i suppose if its going to say things you need to add more stuff....or you could just do a series of t shirts, the " I still believe in things" t shirts and have a different character on each.

I'm torn, I like the simplicity of V1 but I actually really like v4 too, its sort of cool having all sorts of "things" that a lot of people used to believe in but don't up on the shirt.

The design is very cool, but I think you should change the font.



If you need a cool font, there is always http://www.dafont.com/ it's the best !



I also suggest more color choices, the blue design could be on something else that helps contrast the colors...

oh, that link doesn't work;



www.dafont.com/

Make your lettering look like clouds. It'll match the rest better and get nicer responses when you submit. Consider changing the wording to either "I still believe" or simply "believe."



Of your creatures, I find the big head guy (alien?) and water lady (mermaid?) kind of confusing. And why is batman so serious? Couldn't he be doing something or interacting with the others?



Cool concept, though. Good luck!

I love the idea about a font change and the cloud idea could be cool but I will look at that dafont thing, the contrast idea I'm not so sure of, I have these creatures almost translucent to represent that they are figments of some peoples imaginations, a different color wouldn't translate this aswell.



I'll also try and either fix up the mermaid and alien (they can't be that confusing if you guessed right lol) oh and batman is a serious dude.

can someone do me a favor and do a color count? I'm not sure if it shouldbe classified as 3 or 6...

You have six, unless you make half-tones of the areas where the colors overlap.

how do you make halftones?

I counted six too.



(I think Fouchnickens means, that the color might change when you make a shape or drawing overlap in the picture.)

yeah, thats exactly what I did I only used 3 colors (light blue, black and white) and then through some transparency filtering they change when overlapped.

agree with mjoo, make text hand drawn, clouds or something

i like the way you've developed this...



if you can, please comment on mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/5346/The_Weavers_at_the_World_Tree



Thanks!

I'm sorry I might be jumping in late, but for what its worth, I like the very first Nessie. I don't like the cloads on top of Nessie. maybe you could make the water Nessie is swimming in, into a cloud, and have some of he critters, and batman, and all floating around in the cloud

those cloud things are supposed to be like ambigious scales/clouds, I had a version of nessie (wasn't uploaded) without the scales and it looked so wierd, it was more of a giant snake creature, I think the scakes make it more lochness/oggo poggo like.



I'll see what I can do though.

can you change the text to "i still believe" ? cause the "things" are covered by all the creatures.

do you know what is unfreaking believable? I made this almost a week before the parappa thing was announced. It's like I'm psychic rofl.

I love the Batman! That's the seller for me... Great shirt though.

lose Batman.

hee hee, the batman is great! nice design :)

the text is too white

the way I made it, it has 7 colors I think... and due to the fact I don't know flash that well I made a different version thats different shades of white so it looks like clouds... tell me what you think...

should I try and fix the other or is this better?

Fix the other one... It needed those darker blue lines for some definition.



Ditch Batman.

I like the first version the best.

I kind of like V1 the best.

id keep it saying "i still believe in things" but can we do something with that typeface? its really a boring font as is, try something more fairytail - either old english (probably not) or script.



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