Still pretty conceptual. On the tee template is an idea of how the shirt might be covered in animals.

Cute. I like the colour scheme. Maybe try it on a different colour tee... purple? Or cream? The white is just too plain.



Do you mind helping with mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/51748/Pink_Rainbow

http://www.threadless.com/critique/51747/Start_my_Heart

i like you style. maybe size the design a bit. and it's too scattered on the shirt so maybe make the animals closer to each other and all of them under the umbrellas, also put it on a real shirt not the template, it will score higher when you submit it.



if you have time, please



Score and Comment on this Design

And This



thanks.

I like the concept: A little girl holding up umbrella for animals, but it needs more setting... more atmosphere... if that makes any sense.



This has a lot of potential.

what i meant is size it down

5$



submit it