Here's my current progress on the remake challenge. I'm still looking to add some detail, and fill in the landscape some more. I also have another color at my disposal. Any suggestions on how to further improve this would be great.
Oh and here's the design I'm remaking, originally done by Andyg.
dude, this is great!! what about adding some small silhouettes of people running away in the background?The bird seems a little out of place. A subtle pattern on the blanket would be cool or some detail that it is a blanket like a fold or curled corner (it's a little on the straight side).
This is sooo cool! The only thing I would ever change is the bird. Everything is really cartoony except for the bird.. maybe just a bird silhouette? With the simplicity of the twitter bird perhaps? Other than that this is perfect and ready to go on a shirt and be printed!!
And if you're not too busy, I would sure appreciate a comment and score for my second sub ever!!
For this version I removed the bird that nobody liked, and I added a man in the background as well as a squirrel. I also flipped over one of the corners of the blanket to help break up the overly rectangular/mechanical look of it. Thanks for the suggestions.
I definitely love the cutesy style you have goin on in the picture, the style is just killer with this revamp of the old design. Nothing is really bothering me with this version. Anything you feel is iffy?
Oh and here's the design I'm remaking, originally done by Andyg.
http://www.threadless.com/submission/175607/Teddy_Bear_Picnic