Just seeing how people feel about this idea. I think it's got potential but any ideas would be appreciated!

What is the spikey thing? .. i think the hydrant has potential on its own

It's a dragon. Dang, I didn't explain that well enough.

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the composition's too linear right now

yeah. I think I'll have the dragon flying off in the distance. This was just to see what the water was like as it were :) cheers for your comments.

i think this could be funny...

to make sense i think there needs to be a bigger crowd on the sidewalk, and the hydrant and dragon/monster are shown battling in the street

...also show where the hydrant came from-water gushing up or something

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i don't get it...

That's okay!



It basicaly a fire hydrant scareing off a dragon. The dragon is not really present cause I'm not so good at drawing but I'm working at it.

final night bump

Good morning bump.

Ok Tobasco I reckon this could really work. Do the hydrant exploding with water with the dragon shooting up into the air (on the water) And do the maiden crouching behind the hydrant holding on. This is a nice idea. work it baby

Thanks wotto! I'm having issues with the dragon but I hope to get a new version up by tonigh (it's 133 now n my country)!

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nice one, maybe the dragon's face appearing...

Just wait for redrawn one! It's going to be killer!

looking forward to your V2 - loving the initial idea!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/5196/masqued

Sweet. See above for things to ignore. It's just bed time for me and I wanted to get some opinions on how it's begining to look (knowing my luck I'll wake up and there won't be any comments)



The line work will be cleaned up but this isn't my final traced drawing so I'm not to worried about it at them moment.



Thanks to all comments so far and all in the future!

i'm leaving you a comment! don't worry! I like the idea, but prefer the shirt with the maiden in it :)

how about something like v1, the hydrant carrying the maiden in its arms and just a small shadow representing the dragon flying away in the distance, maybe with some wet smoke effect. just an idea

Thanks cats!



Anymore comments to be had?

i can't see version 3

There isn't one, it screwed up when I was loading it and put a blank one in.



Thoughts on V2?

Its gotta be version1, but how about having the dragon, possibly, a little smaller, as a big wet, sad, sorry, soggy pile in a puddle. And the hydrant, standing over him. Kinda like that famous phot of Ali standing over Joe Frazier (i think)



With the maiden looking lovingly at him.

http://www.princeton.edu/~bsu/images/Muhammad%20Ali.jpg



Thats the one i mean

That's a good idea. The dragon could be like a faithful dog all curled up and obediant perhaps?

Thanks man, I think I know the one you mean.

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Come on peoples! Need your help!

Holy shit I think seven-hundred nailed the idea. That would be a great finish to a great starting concept.



What's up, tobasco..?

Cheers mate. I'm pretty stoked with the feedback so far and I've started a couple of sketches based around seven-hundred's idea.



I am all good to thanks!

version two of my critique is up. go check it out.

OMG. HYDRANT.

i like v1 best

ya big sloppy wet sorry dripping dragon