My first submission!

Im very vectorbased and find it a challenge to work with little as possible colors in my designs. The bottom area of the design goes all the way around the shirt.

Hopefully it will result in an 'real' submission, i want to imporve the presentation, and also add a picture of someone wearing the shirt.

Suggestions and ideas are very welcome, thank!

I like the rendering of the sword but am not too taken with the pooled blood at the bottom of the shirt which I find a little too much. I think I'd prefer the sword positioned vertically as well.

Funny that you say that Kididj, that was one of my first versions (having it vertically positioned), but i thought that was a little to 'easy', but less can be more :-)

I agree that the sword should be placed vertically, and lose the pool of blood, it's just so much red. It needs something, i just can't place a finger on it. maybe some other colors for the sword?

Hi Guys, i changed the position of the sword to vertical. Made the color of the sword to black also. Also reduced the pool of blood, what ya thing?


Suggestions and ideas are very welcome, thanks!

I like this version much better!! The colors seem a bit flat- I don't know if thats the look you're going for.



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i like this ! :)

the blood still seems a bit much, and doesn't seem to match the style of the sword - if that makes sense. maybe more like blood spatter?

I agree with doriang that the blood seems to be a different style than the sword. Maybe instead of bordering the bottome of the shirt with a pool of blood, draw a little puddle below the word that it's dripping onto. IDK, that's the only thing I could think of. I like the art on the sword though, wonderful job and thanks for the crit.

maybe you could give it more and bigger blood stains, drips..or draw a hand coming out of the top of the shirt or something like that

Honestly it is just too bland. There isn't enough to look at.



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thanks for your input guys, its indeed boring to look at!

when i have some time again i will change and add stuff to the design, thanks!