Text or no Text? If yes text, any ideas on a good font to use? Placement? Other ideas?

No text and a little bit bigger on the shirt. Great illustration! :)

Haha!!! Awesome, though the removal of the text would be a good idea I think.



I think that if you enlarged it a little and moved it too the bottom of the shirt while adding in a horizon and some clouds as well would make this shirt pretty kick-butt lol!!



But, in this form it is still quite awesome and pretty much ready for submitting! Good luck with it!



Oh yeah! Check out my design if you get the chance! I would really appreciate it!!

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I would say no text.

Looks really great!


Take a look, if you would. Thanks.

no text for me, because I recognize the ships on their own. The New Atlantean Republic is awesome!



Could you please comment and vote on my design?

The text does add a nice touch though I don't know if it's really needed. I guess my only thing with the text would be that you cant really read it from too far away but I suppose that doesn't matter too much... more of an element to the theme.



The actual placement looks like it could be worked on... well it might be the texture that seems to throw things off a big. How does it look without it? Or maybe just toned down a bit actually... cuz it is pretty cool. It just looks funny on the tee.



Overall it's a rad design and well executed ;)



Feel free to check out any of my critiques. I'd appreciate it :)

yeah no text. i would prefer it bigger and in color though, like your 20 if by giant robot.

Great critiques, gang. Thanks.



I'll definitely lose the text and play with the placement and the shape of the neg space/ sky/ etc. I hate to add colors to it, though- I like the old-timey sepia quality to it.

I dropped the text from the design, reworked the clouds and the cannon smoke, and changed other lengths and shapes to fit the shirt a bit better. More shading, too. What say ye?

Also, I went from two colors to one color.

great illustration i like it a lot. It looks better without the text and the shading is great. Good stuff.



Please let me know what you think of my design I would really appreciate the feedback

"Sky High"

Very Nice! is good to submit!



I have new work here http://www.threadless.com/critique/51262/The_Lost_NeverLand

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Much better with the new background! Looks great! Maybe you can turn the text into a newspaper clipping and put it on the back or bottom of the shirt. TFail is right it adds a nice touch to it but shouldn't clutter up the design. At first I thought the robot has one long and one shorter arm. But now I see one is damaged and ripped off. Maybe you can make the damaged arm with the cables a little bit more distinct from the claw on the other side? Sparks flying and ripped cables dangling? But that is just a minor thing.

I think it is pretty much ready to go! :)

A few more changes, including making the arm more battle-damaged and making the flags clearer, with a flag for the Atlanteans now, too. Thanks for the great feedback- keep it coming!

Thats sick as hell!!



check out mine tell me what ya think



http://www.threadless.com/critique/51317/Dissociative_thinking

Sub! :)

Like the colors and placement..not to mention that awesome illustration! Send this in!



If you get a second would you mind checking out my design?

so wicked SUB!



crit mine?

http://threadless.com/critique/51322/indiekid

DOOOD sub this right now

check out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/51305/What_the_Zebra

very impressive!!



Any thoughts on Red Moose V6?

Is that supposed to say "Republic" instead of Repubic (your statement)?change that before you sub it. It looks great!

Real historical design. Colors are real nice and I could see this in the casual section on most closets. This has been through the last step of refinery and is ready to go. I think it looks perfectly done.



Check mine out plz.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50886/Dark_and_Shy_at_Day_Bright_and_Wild_at_Night

Great- sounds like the design is good to go. I'll just work on the preview a bit more and sub it (and thanks to fhigi25 for pointing out the "Repubic" typo. Yikes!) Thanks, everyone!

Thanks again for the great advice, everyone! Unless I missed something I'm going to push this version into the running tonight.

Thanks again for the great advice, everyone! Unless I missed something I'm going to push this version into the running tonight.



(Ignore v4, I forgot to resave the file)

simply awesome. i would sport this.

A few last minute tweaks. This shall be submitted...

...damn just thought of something else. I wish I could delete the last couple of versions- I keep seeing small things I want to change. I'll try to stay out of the critiques until I'm absolutely sure I won't have any more tweaks....

Playing around with the halftones of the clouds- trying to get the grid of the dots to converge to the robot.

The thumbnail looks like it has a bit of color, which looks great. I enjoy this version as well and IMO it's ready to sub

Very cool! I love the detail in this piece.



Would love to see a larger, high res version....



Also, just wondering whether you have considered this design on other colour t-shirts?



I'd love to see this submitted.





Could you maybe have a look at my new critique, Candy Mountain and give some feedback?



Thanks! :)

This is the final one. Thanks again for the feedback, everybody!

This is great. you need to submit this. I would buy it.

Thanks randomfrong- I just subbed it. : )

Good luck and see you over there! Will be easy scoring this :) !