my baby cousin was playing on his alphabet mat and popped the N out of its spot and started sucking on it. He inspired me to make this design.

Cute!!

Maybe change the color of you hard lines to a lighter brown. And try an orange shirt it might look nice on that. The filter should be on the design not the whole file.



Check mine plz.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50886/Dark_and_Shy_at_Day_Bright_and_Wild_at_Night

I'm not so keen on the type, and I think you need to very you line weight, this has good potential though

my baby cousin was playing on his alphabet mat and popped the N out of its spot and started sucking on it. He inspired me to make this design.



i have no idea why the pic is all flat and stretched! i saved as jpg on illustrator, cropped it to the size it's supposed to be and then i saved for the web as jpg. what am i doing wrong???

what the heck... it came out normal.... wierd.

oh, i fixed the shading on the face, and i decreased the stroke size for the "nom nom" for this version

Cute concept. Not sure who your target audience would be though. I don't know many people who would wear a toddler on their shirt.



The shadows on the face seem too strong, and unmotivated. The light on the shirt and hair are great though.

maybe you can vary the thickness of the lines and use lighter colors :)

maybe make the words look like blocks?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/59832/Neapolitan_Napoleon#v8