I deleted the last critique because V1 had gotten so much attention that I wana try another V1 that isn't just an outline to see if people will comment as much this time.

The name is sort of shakey.. so if anyone has a suggestion, that'll be helpful :)

Leave a link after your comment to your own critique and I'll check it out!

There are some very cool elements here, however I prefer the original linework version and think it somewhat loses something in colour. Also, I note you've deleted the evolution of man and robot attacking city sections! Again, nice, but not as cool as the first in my opinion.

The comments are just flowing like wine! :I

Love it. Try putting it on a shirt?



Check mine out?

well, can we compare to the last V1? In any way, that's insanely beautifully drawn, for sure. If i understand well, the deer is a metaphore of hope, positive vibrations on how to escape from the jungle law?



i can't see what could be added, or modified, honestly, for me that's a PERFECT sub...but first, a good presentation on tee template could help people to see how you see it, and help you too.



congrats that's beautiful

Love the colours and design. Submit it, I say.



Care to return the critique? :)

Gosh I'm not sure I can put this on a flash template, I imported the images and reduced the quality to a point that wasn't too bad but I couldn't go any lower, and the file is 400 kb :C

All your changes look good from what I remember. Can we see a tee version to judge what it will look like? I'm not sure about the open space by the phoenix, but maybe it looks great on a tee.



Excellent use of your colors btw, I can't believe it's only 8!

wow great ... SUBMIT ...

had the same problem with flash templates ...

but what u got to do is what u got to do :(...

u have to reduce quality ...



Plz vote $ comment...

Ok, this is placement! I'm not sure how else you could place this.. so.. idk if there's much to do with it. But isn't the quality just awful? And it's still only down to like 140 kb :(

Leave a link after your comment to your own critique and I'll check it out :3

Wow, this is crazy. Very nice.

Ideas for mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50629/Drawn_of_the_Dead

print this now! good luck dude! :))

dull? :(

Do you guys think I could submit this with higher quality and leave a link for the full design? This thing isn't gona go onto a flash template without a lot of trouble and crappy quality..

Wow. This is intense. color, line work, illustrative quality--top notch. I'd love to hear the story behind this, especially the dragon.

The only thing that I would even consider changing is how straight the grass in front of the deer is, but then again, that is a tiny, nit picky, personal detail.

I'd sub it :)



If you could give me some advice, that would be amazing :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50565/An_Average_Day_in_New_York

Wow. Definitely submit. Try just jpging the design on the shirt in high quality and providing a link. If you leave it the way it looks on this version all the colors look less vibrant than they should be.

So just leave a link for the placement and have the pic of the actual design up?

Nature reborn?

(An alternative title)

"And it's still only down to like 140 kb :(" submit it to as close as 250 as you can get on a shirt and have a link to the full design. its not really that awful in 140, so i wouldn't take flash out of the option.



one thing you need to fix is the shadow on this shirt, the phoenix and the tiger are being overpowered by it.

I agree with isawa, if you have the image down to 140kb, then you may have over shot it just a tad. As long as it's 250k or under you ought to be ok!! Also, I had some trouble with my flash presentation's size until I saved the images as PNG files instead of JPG; and mine's a 3-IMAGE flash file!!

You could probably do both of these on a 2-IMAGE flash template (just make the "placement pic" lower quality image of the two - you want everyone to really notice the detail in the design!!)



You probably know all of this already!!!



Love the piece!! I just can't think of any alternate titles for you!!! What I've come up with is too cheesy!! Sorry!!

If you have flash, you could try this template.

Plenty of instructions on that page. Either way, Definitely link to a high res image!!

NICE!

that looks awesome! you should definitely submit it as is.



Check out mine if you have the chance!

i really like a lot. just sub it. i say this now, i'm scoring it 5.



btw:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50642/Scapeys

submit it! other than that little shadow on the right (and I highly doubt it's on the shirt itself) it looks fantastic!

I wouldn't change anything, it looks fantastic. Although I wonder how it would look on a darker shirt.



But I'm giving it a 5 when you submit it!

um this is amazing.

very cool, reminds me of a Salvador Dali picture, I'd submit it!



Could you take a look at mine... What lies ahead

Thanks Berbs42, but that's the template I use already lol, I used it in my first sub and tried to use it for this one, but the file ended up still being 400kb, and there was no way I was gona be able to shave off another 150 kb with the quality the pictures were already at. :/

This is gorgeous! Love it!!! I think the placement is perfect. Submit this!



Would you please be able to look at mine too?

http://threadless.com/critique/50735/up_up_away

much appreciated! thanks

Save in gif, the quality is the same, but much smaller files

FUCK YES! submit.

SAWEEET! SUBMIT!

quality doesnt look bad to me

Love the idea ad colour of the shirt. I think there is a bit too much space between the tiger and and the red bird. Maybe enlarging the tiger? I think that would also create more weight on the bottom of the design. Check out ma design?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50829/Party_Monster

Or maybe rotate and play with the location of the red bird. thumbs up though!

So should I just sub this picture (with a little more quality) and then leave a link to the highres pic?

The image is SUPERB! I love that! That part is definitely ready to send in; however, I don't know if I'd submit this with those light shadows that look overlaid on the shirt. Can you instead just dodge and burn the image in PS to create the same shadows?

Got a new version up of The Herd. I know you said you couldn't comment until you saw color, but could I get your input on the direction?

yes !

it kicks ass with color



:)

wow!

wow its beautiful, like the first version, its more vibrant

Stunning work. Dont know how you did it with 8 colors! You've got my vote. Go for it.

I would appreciate your feedback.

The Last Battle

Reading Railroad

great

Epic stuff!



Please crit mine!

This is amazing. I would buy it in a second.

If you don't use one of the Flash templates, then i think you should present it like this (on the shirt), with a link to a high res image in the opening comment.

Made one last change to the design since someone mentioned it. If this is ready, I'll put it on a shirt and post it back up again. I just want this thing to be perfect lol :1

I only made a small change to the grass in front of the deer

wow! I love your style. Looking forward to seeing it on a shirt!

Now there's not a straight line in there (save for the dragon's horn - but even that's mostly curved), so everything just flows!! Superb!!

My word that's looking sweet. Great job. Dragon's arms are looking awesome-like now!

Time to submit!

Looks great!

have you subbed it yet? can't wait to score 5 for this.



if you have time, can you score my submission?

http://www.threadless.com/submission/226041/Alien_Discovery

Wow, tht is great! I love the whale and the style of the water coming out of its mouth. Wonderful!

Ok, this is gona be the version I submit hopefully! Tell me what you think :)

fantastic!

I think this is ready.



Have a look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/51012/The_Coming_of_Age

BUY BUY BUY BUY UY BUY BYT B7TH YT!!

Bob... has been neglected...

oh and def. show some detail in the final submission, your talent in making use of 8 colors needs to be shown off!

SUB! Its perfect, and I love the yin yang fish

wow that's real good. Great work

very cool :P.



Critique some of my stuff please?

this is gold. good placement, excellent detail, composition, and color choice. well done and good luck!



if you have time

Ok! It's been subbed! Thanks everyone!

Awesome, Could you please comment and vote on my design?

this looks great submit! thanks for the input. its been approved.. mind scoring and commenting?



http://www.threadless.com/submission/226473/Jungle_Cat

amazing

Looks amazing!! Good luck :-) not that you need it.



Want to help me out and comment and vote?

Let us know when it's up!!

Also, thank you for your input on my critique!

It's now up for voting!!

Awesome! Will buy it definitely!



If you have time please comment on mine :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50403/Loading_Failed

Subbed? Awesome! This is certainly your best design, Ars Fera.

Awesome work. Good luck! I will make sure to vote.



Please take a look at my new version and leave feedback:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58727/The_Cheerful_Street

woooo

great design



may you see mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58215/Space_creature

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58496/Wounded_bird

That looks really, really nice. I love the drawing and the style. If I were to change anything, I'd harden or remove (or do something?? not sure) the shading around the tiger's mouth and the zebra's body.



have a look and critique of mine if you have time please!

The Oblivious Sproutmonster

0.0 holy..



awesome drawing

and the koi fishes are a nice touch..

Amazing really Its just perfect i love it :D





Please score my submissions !







Submission wings of dawn



Submission(abstract)

Effn' fantastic! Looks like a clear win for a Threadless print. Well done.



Just a small thing - I'd drop the saber tooth skull out or adjust the angle a bit. It's too similar in position to the tiger's head.



Check out my weird: We All Scream for Ice Cream

Wow this is a pretty cool, unique idea. Go for it.



Take a look at some of my submissions please:



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