I'm going to work on the face area a bit more. I was also thinking of adding more details to each van to make each one a little different from one another.
i think it should be less symmetrical, and have more individual details on the vans- sort of like a junk yard assembled from different types of van, not a fleet of identical Secret Service vans.
I think this shirt would sell, but the eyes are a bit distracting. Maybe if you make the face look more simple. Kinda like a smiley face but in your own style of course. Use that dark gray color that you used for the vans for the eyes & mouth.
I just noticed that I'm missing 2 lines that divide the open Van Doors at the ear areas from the Seats that are peeking into the opening. :( I'll have to fix that part.
I think this is a great design. My only real crit is that you are using maroon as a second color, but it doesn't show up in your piece enough to make it worth while. Perhaps you could add some red robotics/engineering references or perhaps lines of code in the background of the design, it would justify the second color and I think enhance your design.
thanks guys those are some good ideas. I don't want to make this too complex so we will see how I can make this work. Perhaps the Burgundy could be a Burgundy foil.
do you think it would be too much if I made each of the vans into work vans like: Plumber, Cable Guy, Pool Service, etc etc?
no, not at all. I think this would make your design much more interesting. It's far too symmetrical and crisp. the differences and details don't need to be huge and glaring to the point of distracting from the robot, but it would be nice to see some attention to detail.
Any more feed back. I'm not sure I'm happy with the Vans around the mouth. The graphics for the companies are not working with the design there. It makes him look like he has funky stuff on his face.
Lol! I love how he is made comlpletely out of vans. I also like the color scheme.. this is really nice.. I don't like to leave a comment in critiques without any advice or helpful points but this is gona be one of them lol, I have no idea what to change about this, amazing job!!
And if you're not too busy, I would sure appreciate a comment and score for my second sub ever!! Time is running out! 0 days left lol!
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