I have less than 1% experience with Flash, so hopefully you'll be able to see some of the details.

WOW. Amazing job! I wouldn't change a thing.

A child's imagination is boundless, so I chose to have 2 kids flying over a forest. As the kids pass over the trees, they become uprooted, no longer bound to the world's rules :)

That's awesome, personally I don't see any issues with it at all.

That is just perfect! I'm not sure about adding some birds and stuff, but it really doesn't need anything else... just submit it and cross your fingers!

Heck, I would buy this shirt if it was printed right now! Amazing, sub this now! I love the style and concept.



crit mine?

Oh man! I want one!

but see how the clouds behind the tree kinda gets chopped off? Maybe extend it a bit so you can see the tail end of the cloud poking out from the other side of the tree. Might make it look less awkward. But I only noticed that after working really hard to think some cool feedback I might be able to give (I like to give at least one suggestion). But with or without that, it's still amazing. I say just go through and submit it. I'm honestly blown away. good work.



check out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50406/Gaurdian

my bad about the above link. It's this one

really cool idea.

i love the colours as well - everything about this rocks!



my only suggestion is more to do with the presentation - try use a real tee photo instead of the template.

you can get a photo from this group on flickr, just read the disclaimer.

it's not a biggy, but i personally think the real tees compliment designs a lot more than the template does, it could really set this off.



if you get a chance, i'd appreciate feedback on van gogh and pot and kettle thanks

that last link is meant to be this, sorry

Yeah, that t-shirt template is not very flattering. I'll have to use a real photo or a model. I just wanted to make sure the entire placement could be seen.

Fantastic colors! i would like the cloud directly behind the tree to be longer it looks to bluntly cut.

I agree with the cloud comment, and I'd also like to see some of that purplish-blue from the tree trunks in the kids' pants and socks; I think it would connect them even more (if that's sort of what you're going for). Otherwise, this is supercool.

(I say "needs work" but only on what I wrote, which is pretty minor - everything else - ready to SUBMIT)

Have a look?

Awesome! But I agree about the cloud--it mimicks the shape of the tree which is weird. Other that that, it's perfect!

*love tap*

I agree with the cloud idea. Some purple on the kids would be interesting. Something about the boys shirt bothers me too. It lumps out a bit on the left top side I think. Other than all that... good luck. It's good.

Your kids need eyebrows. Although, I hear no eyebrows is the new thing in the fashion world.

hey man, wonder if you could relook at my crit? I updated it. Thanks! here

Clouds!

DETAILS!

I prefer version 1, with lighter clouds... but don't make any other change, it's just perfect as it is!

Awesome! its perfect.. submit.



check out my designs?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/50543/Jungle_Cat

this is beautiful love the colours... submit it!

me too please...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47843/Mixed_Tapes#v5

The trees and colors look great. I think the foreground area should be reduced and faded out more gradually. It looks a bit boxy on the shirt template.

Wow! This is really nice~

Nice.

Can you evaluate?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/49198/FANTASTIC_QUARTET_OF_MATH

Much better clouds! Sub!

That's sharp, go for it!

I'd just like to see the placement on the tee as it's hard to imagine the finished deal at the moment. Nice illustration!



Please crit mine!

This is just the detail, I have the placement on version 1 & 2

I think he may mean placement on a real tee or model. I really do like where you have it placed on the template tee; would you consider letting the ground area bleed out all the way to the bottom of the shirt?

Of course I'd let the bottom bleed :) I've played with a couple bleeding options and just haven't decided what to use yet. I appreciate the suggestions I've recieved so far.

Interesting.... I think sub. I wouldn't wear it, it's not my style, but I think it's good. And people think it's good.

Jaws of HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! .... Heh... Lawl...

Eyebrows. Real shirt template. Then perfect.

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i love the artwork, and it would be so cool to see it wrap around the tee. but overall i love it! will for sure buy!