thanks to isaboa for the title!



feedback is much appreciated. this is for the cornelius 'sensuous' themed contest.



thanks for looking!

Beautiful shirt, I honestly don't see anything I don't like about it; well maybe the circle with the spiral shape to it but it still doesn't make much difference in my opinion that I like this design.

cool thanks! here's a link to a larger view:



http://bp1.blogger.com/_FSDsWOoHmls/Ro8v5mWuosI/AAAAAAAAAH4/xK2gC6rdZ40/s1600-h/damascene_web_large.jpg

This submission looks really good. Nice work!



link

thanks and thanks for the link!

Wow, that's awesome! I love it. =D

thanks!

Now THAT is a great improvement from the last time I saw it. I say go for it.

thanks dude

I like the tree and the kid. It reminds me my my childhood. I totally dig your style. i wanna have your babies.

a very beautiful illustration!

hahaha.

johnny baboon wants to have your babies.

lol. sorry made me laugh.



I really like this.

And thanks for ALWAYS commenting on my blogs/critiques etc.



your stuff is awesome.

and I like the title.

:)

thanks Tyler! hope your sub does well!

:) mee too.

I just redid the FSM idea.

go check it out if you will.

Just to add to the sensuality, maybe have the person blowing bubbles as well?

nice. the colours are perfect as well. good luck!

awesomeness, i love it, submit, i wanna buy when its made

thanks everyone



fouchnickens--awesome suggestion--i originally had a girl blowing the bubbles, but for whatever reason i couldnt get it to look right. so i ended up simplifying it.

It's a great design. The bird-shape that the bubbles are making seems out of place to me for some reason, though.

thanks Rathany---yeah, the bird figure does stand out a little...i guess i was going for contrast, i hope its not too much

fantastic! very very very unique and strong style. must have taken a while! hope this one wins!

this could be a winner. it has a great feel to it :D $5

Love this.

Though I agree with Rathany, not sure about the bird.

It seems to pull more focus than it should.



Dunno.

thanks all!--subbin it gonna have to take my chances with the bird, i'm afraid.

i think i'd consider making the "deep forest" to the left (behind the boy) darker, as it is on the right of the tree behind the bird...and possibly darker also toward the left/right sides of drawing as well, under the branches. i think this would add even more depth. otherwise nice job!!

submit! really cool design! future 5$! from me! :)

Good luck.

Great work!

wicked drawing dude, I'm still on the fence on how it looks on the shirt, at first I thought it kind of looked junky but its growing on me (not sure if it was a placement/size etc thing) I still voted submit.

Ooo this is impressive but the design does look a little awkward on the shirt but not enough to stop be from buying it.

i'm only counting 4 colors...maybe i've missed one...but if not, adding another shade of light purple or maybe some other color could open up doors to even more illumination and contrast....just a thought...

oh, maybe there's a darker green i didn't count???

GREAT $5 for the future.



Don't change anything. It doesn't need work.

Just submit it!

thanks guys---!



heyhey---there are 5 colors



dark green--lines

light green

light brown

dark brown--shading on trunks

yellow

love it! done deal. submit!!

absolutely beautiful! I'd wear it.

Yeah, hopefully we'll get to wear it soon!

Opps forgot, can't post pix

The Link:

At Night in the Damascene Wood

this msut be a winner! O.O

this looks great and it looks like the type of thing that would go over really well here. one thing : i think the glowing bubbles forming into the shape of a bird are totally unnecessary...bet it'll get printed though.

critique this

lulz

Gorgeous!!!! Like a modern Arthur Rackham illustration! Lower placement, though?

yellow parts-- glow in the dark? maybe...

Great job!

beautiful, definately submit this!!!



please critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/22547/Bombs_Away

It was submitted while ago.

nice