I thought this idea was funny, do you think so?

Where should I take this from here?

I would like it to stay fairly simple with minimum colors, but this is a critique, so lemme have it! thanks!

I would like to see the color version. ^ ^



I'm new here.Mind to look at my design. and drop me some critique ~cheers

Any ideas on the layout, general design, before i vector it out?

I think it's a cool idea, Have you seen bullfighting posters? maybe that style-coloring could work well

thanks ivan, i will look some up!

very funny. you could always do a classic "put the last step on the back" layout. not sure if i'm feeling the numbers. i do very much love the birds.

Really good start man. Got an immediate chuckle right off the bat. Maybe the bullfighter could be wearing a red cape? Just a thought...

I like it like that, with the notebook sketch look. Colors always make a design look better, but I'm liking it plain. Then again I haven't seen what a color version would look like. Just don't delete this version just incase more people feel the same.

Any ideas for my critique?

Love it! and if you put #3 on the back, you should ad a subtle background stadium IMO.

Thoughts for me?

i think this joke would be stronger if it was just the last panel. you really don't need the rest especially if you give the bull a black eye or bruise on the face.



the design will be stronger that way.

I thought this idea was funny, do you think so?


Where should I take this from here?


I would like it to stay fairly simple with minimum colors, but this is a critique, so lemme have it! thanks!

I know somebody else is going to have something different to say, but I like it as is. :)

Thanks for all the Comments on the last one,!



I took Ivans idea, and expanded it to include the actual look and feel of the posters as well as the colors! :)



I am going to take this sketch and try to emulate the "painting style" of those old bullfighter posters, many of which I referenced when creating this sketch. I think if I pull it off, it could be a great design! :)



Any other suggestions? thanks again!

Exactly what ginette said.

Thanks Opo! But I think the colors and style will really make it reminiscent of those old posters!



Also, I plan on using a subtle background colors (thinking this will be on pale yellow shirts) to "frame" each frame. :)

Also, I think you should colour it like a velvet painting.

Colour?? How'd that 'u' sneak int here? I am not European!

Can you take a look at my critique and tell me what you think? haha I looked at your other designs and you have a lot printed, so i figured I'd ask.

Bee-utiful Shirt

Thanks mezo, but I would probably do just the one panel if it were going to be a more cartoony looking finish, but I think with the "painted" effect, a bruised eye might not be enough. plus, I really like the ""many panels" type of shirt designs

you're still the man tom burns. like all of your designs. and your site kicks ass.

Awesome, Now to add some colors to perfection :)



If you have time please comment :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50403/Loading_Failed

Real nice the colour and finishes will make this design really pop.



crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50850/loading

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50849/outa_breath

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50844/short_straw

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50838/your_history

Looks wonderful!! Very reminiscent of the spanish style, can't wait to see the colored version

Ok, here is the painted version to emulate those old bullfighting posters. let me know what you think?! thanks!

great work Sir

thanks!

im fighting the urge to push this into submission!

just in case there are any awesome ideas before I do

hahaha. this is cool.



I think in the second image, if he's punching the bull in the face (is he?), that needs to be clearer.



The pink stockings are not really working for me.



Overall, nice piece though :)





Could you maybe swing past my critique, Spotted and give me some feedback on colours?



Thanks! :)

different style for you Tom. I like it.

and how do you get people to critique on your work? i'm only starting on threadless and haven't gotten any.

mine: just a rainforest

Coolness. I read your interview. You are from Murfreesboro?
I'm in Lebanon, TN.

like it! put it on a t shirt ;)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/75495/escape