Rempit is derived from the Malay term "Mat Rempit". Mat Rempit is basically Malaysia local illegal motor racers who race their small cc motorbikes with annoying sound & speed.They usually wearing orange sunglasses with silver necklace hanging around their neck.



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Interesting idea. His hair is too pokey and cut + paste coming out of his helmet. And maybe his neck could stop at the lines that make his shirt, rather that just stop. Just some ideas, good luck!



Please comment and vote if you have the time.

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i think the illustration looks good. would be nice to different shirt color options.



if you have a chance, let me know what you think.

its pretty good, dont know how much the writing helps



check mine out if u can

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50199/BANG

i'd have to say the writing does not help, and the design may look better smaller on the shirt. the top right tooth could be fixed, but everyone's teeth arent strait anyways, so its rather good.



Do you mind helping me out with my critique?

The illo is fantastic, but I agree about the text that it is not needed. Designs with text typically don't go over well. I would put it on a real tee and maybe give it a distressed look--I think it would suit the design. Well done.:)

Yeah, smaller maybe lower too. And no text.

Thoughts on mine?

hey pretty cool illustration style....but i would love it if you would get some work around the mouth done cause it feels like it is bit overdone....the lines you were trying to achieve....cheers to the crazy mat rempits

Interesting design with an equally interesting back story. I agree with Ricki Jane, the hair is looking too symmetrical in places and could use some more individuality. Also, the FTW in the helmet is kinda strange, and if it carries a meaning other than "for the win" then it'd be confusing for the potential buyer/viewer. I'd say remove it and replace it with a simple graphic instead.

haha cool guy. Send it in!

Submit it just put some other shirt options and the teeth look kinda weird like there's much much more on the top than the bottom.



Please comment my design

Rempit is derived from the Malay term "Mat Rempit". Mat Rempit is basically Malaysia local illegal motor racers who race their small cc motorbikes with annoying sound & speed.They usually wearing orange sunglasses with silver necklace hanging around their neck.





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some changes on:



text

neck

smoke



thanks for your critiques.much appreciate

cool :D

the previous one was smoother, not sure which one I like more...



Any thoughts?

not to be confused, i like the changes, i am not sure about the rough vs smooth part.

Haha coool!



Would love to have a comment on my 'Childhood' submission.. Bubblegum Breakout!

would be cool to see some type of reflection in his shades

helo!



tbh, i'm not sure whether i like it just his head. I would've prefered if u drew the whole thing with him on his bike speeding down a tiny road or something. Really like your illustration style!

vote 4 u :-)

It looks like the head is emerging out of the body cool :-)



Maybe helmet -yeah the colour seriously. btw the helmet colour is not in box list . Maybe extra bold outline @ helmet might help it looks cooler.

Sick!!! $5 sent it in!!!



Can you vote and comment on my design?

http://www.threadless.com/submission/224565/Love_Sucks

Thank you!!!!!!

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Cool!! Great illo!

I'm not sure about the text font, but anyway it's a great design!

Cool, id like to see some shading in the glasses,

dig your style man, Id say it just needs some shading on the glasses

Rempit is derived from the Malay term "Mat Rempit". Mat Rempit is basically Malaysia local illegal motor racers who race their small cc motorbikes with annoying sound & speed.They usually wearing orange sunglasses with silver necklace hanging around their neck.







I Just tried to apply on some different colors option : purple and teal

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not a fan of the teal with green. maybe just try it with the blue.

Good good good.

Love the line and use of tones/shadows.

Needs just a wee bit of work....I can't quite place my finger on it.

Try some more color combinations. I see it going somewhere. It almost feels like it should have a psychodelic treatment for some reason. It also feels more like this character is part of a cartoon show, it's very commercial.



If you don't mind, could check out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50313/Relax_A_Little

love the blue one purple, looks great ...

think its ready to submit ...

may u vote $ comment ....

I like the teal one best :)

I think the blue one is good. Trying giving some skulls images since they're "sick" people.

Both of these color sets have their appeals, I'd go with whatever one you prefer the most. Try some more out?

Thanks everyone for the comments and critiques. My design is now up for score. Please vote for me Here



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