Not a bad idea,
clean up the illustration.

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i love it, very cute.

critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/54107/My_Cheese_Is_Grilled

hahah cute expression! i'd work on adding textures to the cat--maybe some shading would work.

It needs a little work on looking more clean and sharp. It still has kind of a sketchy "hand-drawn" look about it. If you want to do some more shading or texture work on that cat fella I'd recommend looking up some of Jeremy Fish's work for inspiration. All of his stuff is very sharp, smooth and crisp. I also love the way he does shading in his works.

Yeah. You should probably just go Google Jeremy Fish. Even if you don't feel the need to add shading or any texture, just do it because your brain will thank you.

Kudos and good luck!

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I haven't really cleaned it up yet. I just tried wanted to try something different with it first. I'm not sure if I should stick with the white or change it back to black.

XD i like this cat thingy! .. he looks like he needs a thought bubble .

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i like it on white. i'd try some other colors on the cat, like orange or green :)

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Cleaned up.

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submit it!
please critique mine
Death rope!
by b12345

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I think he is amazingly cute, but he needs something more to make him a really punchy design. Also it bugs me how because of his tail he has to be placed so far over in the left corner, maybe curl the tail around him or in front of him and move him a little closer to the center? (though not all the way of course)

Should try and work on the design more, like maybe make him look a little dopey-er? Or give him a reason to be saying "Bwah"
And maybe work on the placement a little more, or change his size.

Wheres the hook? It's just some creature saying bwah....except hes not. He's not even saying bwah so it's just some wide mouthed creature. You could get away with this if it was a more graphic illustration, or you could change up the design? Maybe he's looking at something which makes him have that expression. Mabye change his position so that he's looking at you.

I tried adding the thought bubble. The character says "cat".

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Does anyone have anything more to say that "needs work" and "don't submit"?

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Well... Umm... This is the first time I see thsi design, and I can try.... IMO, the problem is that it's neither very "artistic" nor funny, so it's chances seem all little slim. I don't know if it's work the effort, but adding shades and maybe a small drool drop hanging out of the mouth would help...

Sorry.
Cat's Nightmare

Hey,that's nice..Simple character..Dunno what's the word mean,but it looks great with the character..Maybe you can add more detail to make it looks better..

Check out mine ^^
http://threadless.com/critique/56765/Horsepower

So I ditched the thought bubble since I figured most people wouldn't get it. I also added some shading.

I'm wondering if there's any point in still working on this, or if anyone thinks I should just ditch the idea and start another one.

I suggest that you either develop this idea further or start another, you have what it takes artistically, but it just needs more support as an idea. Keep up the good work.

A comment and score would be awesome!

maybe have him spewing something cool I dont know this need a bit of developing tho.

crit mine if u like
http://www.threadless.com/critique/56982/sex_sells

I think you can make it a bit smoother and provide a better placement - right now it seems kinda bland.

Take a look! For each Critique and vote, I plant one goat.

great, I love it. Good job

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