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Phinx
Phinx on Aug 03 '09
The first one is actually my college's school colors. It's a weird concept but I hope you guys enjoy it. =)
Libster
Libster on Aug 03 '09
Cool concept. I understand the simplicity, but maybe try adding a bit more detail.
TFail
TFail on Aug 03 '09
This is cool. I like the composition. I sort of feel like it needs more detail though. Maybe some more outlines or something? And not too sure about the soft edges on the splatter and outer outline... but it doesn't look bad. My fav are the gray on white and multi color on black.
ericamichelle265
ericamichelle265 on Aug 03 '09
I like the concept as well. My favorite is the greyscale color scheme on the black shirt. Maybe if you made the paint splatter in the back a bright, vivid color with the greyscale robot on top... it would bring it out alot.
Gergeosson
Gergeosson on Aug 03 '09
coolish :) I digg it!



To make it crazier, try giving the gray splash and the border a bright color. Like a bright light blue colour. I donno, play a litlle with it. Maybe a gradient of rainbow colours?
Jeiji
Jeiji on Aug 03 '09
I don't know why, but I want it. I think it's cool, man!

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a-monkey-in-a-box
a-monkey-in-a-box on Aug 03 '09
It's great! My favorite is the grayish robot on the black shirt. Like someone else suggested, try using a more vibrant color on the splash. Maybe orange or yellow.
ericamichelle265
ericamichelle265 on Aug 03 '09
Oh, I forgot... If you get a chance, I have another critique: http://www.threadless.com/critique/50003/American_Girl
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 03 '09
Thank guys I'll try and brighten it up somemore.
OrangeSensation1
OrangeSensation1 on Aug 05 '09
Hey Phix



Nice design you have there! Maybe some shien on teh robot will look nice perhaps? Thats my only suggestion.



Black with red/grey colour robot would be my choice (brings out my eyes! X-D).
pyko
pyko on Aug 05 '09
looks cool, though not exactly my type of shirt.



just a random suggestion - the background splatter on the top left, maybe try make it not stick out as much (at first i thought it was a laser or something coming out from the robot)
mismonaut
   mismonaut on Aug 05 '09
Right now, this is just a robot on a shirt. I like the loud, self-aware title, but it doesn't come across in the design.



Lose the splatter, and let us know why he's so proud to announce his robotdom.
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