The first one is actually my college's school colors. It's a weird concept but I hope you guys enjoy it. =)

Cool concept. I understand the simplicity, but maybe try adding a bit more detail.

This is cool. I like the composition. I sort of feel like it needs more detail though. Maybe some more outlines or something? And not too sure about the soft edges on the splatter and outer outline... but it doesn't look bad. My fav are the gray on white and multi color on black.

I like the concept as well. My favorite is the greyscale color scheme on the black shirt. Maybe if you made the paint splatter in the back a bright, vivid color with the greyscale robot on top... it would bring it out alot.

coolish :) I digg it!



To make it crazier, try giving the gray splash and the border a bright color. Like a bright light blue colour. I donno, play a litlle with it. Maybe a gradient of rainbow colours?

I don't know why, but I want it. I think it's cool, man!

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It's great! My favorite is the grayish robot on the black shirt. Like someone else suggested, try using a more vibrant color on the splash. Maybe orange or yellow.

Oh, I forgot... If you get a chance, I have another critique: http://www.threadless.com/critique/50003/American_Girl

Thank guys I'll try and brighten it up somemore.

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Nice design you have there! Maybe some shien on teh robot will look nice perhaps? Thats my only suggestion.



Black with red/grey colour robot would be my choice (brings out my eyes! X-D).

looks cool, though not exactly my type of shirt.



just a random suggestion - the background splatter on the top left, maybe try make it not stick out as much (at first i thought it was a laser or something coming out from the robot)

Right now, this is just a robot on a shirt. I like the loud, self-aware title, but it doesn't come across in the design.



Lose the splatter, and let us know why he's so proud to announce his robotdom.