Help me make this great!

I like the concept of this one a lot.
and ofcourse the design is pretty nice.
but why are your other 2 designsway difffernt?
lol,

I'm not fond of the perspective, how the plug and slide come out towards you... and definitely try some different colors.

i think if you made it more obvious that the cord was attached to the slide, the concept would be clearer. but i think that this is a good start. good luck!

boogie woogie oogie

i like the design...but how can a slide b electric..? u mean 'electric' as a colour...? electric blue is nice...nice work though!

Any idea where the cord should connect to make it look attached?

andreas, the electric slide is a dance

it's supposed to be a play on words. There's a dance called "electric slide"

i would say it should be attached somewhere near the bottom (of the ladder?)--i think thats how most electrical appliances are.

Maybe make the bottom of the slide a conveyor belt? That would make it understandably electric.

i want some lyrics

oh! sorry guys...Im greek...so i have no idea of this particular dance u r talkin aboyut...hehhh

here you go

aww it didn't work

here's a link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4NZwnm6B90M

I changed the cord, and made it attached to the bottom of the slide

Is there anything you could do to make the slide itself look a little more... electrified? kinda boring as is :) love the idea though

Please put it on a white shirt. It would look cool.

is this what you had in mind for the electric look of the slide?

and

I'll see what it looks like on white

hmm i like better without the electricity, but if you're going to use it you really need to lose the outline! Doesn't work with the style of the piece.

Maybe make the bottom of the slide a conveyor belt? That would make it understandably electric.

Just be warned, you will get a lot of comments "this design looks like: " Land of 1000 Dances (select tee)

Nice design tho!

Oh man! : ( I don't feel so creative now. I thought i was being pretty original

Don't feel bad, we *all* repeat good ideas every now and then. This isn't as common as "food with faces" and others.

BTW, just check out "www.threadless.com/all" it'll give you an idea of what not to do, since it will have little chance of printing if already done.

i lyk this version, but the electricty needs to be shaped alittle better

p.s: ur shirt doesnt ook lyk tht one shirt, just becus theres a slide there means nothing, i love ur slide

I changed the cord a bit. (smoothed it out, and added a small shadow) Can anyone out there possibly help me with a color for the shirt?

Please! : )

yellow? coral? (it maybe too much with the pink in the art already)

where are you thinking for placement?

just in the middle center where my previous designs shows. Do you think it would look better on the bottom or something?

You need to think beyond the concept of what most t-shirts will conform to and think of what would be eye catching to you.

Think awkward.

This concept needs some work - and it would be best if reconceptualized to a more archtypical version of a slide. YOu know the slides you remember from when you were a kid.