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Avizpado
Avizpado on Jul 30 '09
This is our first design, hope you like it, please comment.
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impish
impish on Aug 03 '09
It's a nice start. Perhaps take the character, shrink it down a bunch and repeat it in a swarm - that way you could have a lot of fun with placement.
Berbs42
Berbs42 on Aug 03 '09
Or one large wasp, and a plethora of smaller, gray ones swarming on the side in the background.
buddhahopper
buddhahopper on Aug 03 '09
Ya you need to do more with this right now it is way to plane. Also i need some help on a design i am thinking in entering in the threadless childhood theme. Comment here
fkelly
fkelly on Aug 03 '09
The only thing I can think of is, what's the point? It's a good looking character, but it needs to become more than that to really do anything for the viewer.
Libster
Libster on Aug 03 '09
I like Berbs42's idea about the swarm of smaller grey wasps.
Libster
Libster on Aug 03 '09
Mind checking out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/49999/Belly_Button
Simps0n
Simps0n on Aug 03 '09
Nice Designn!!!





Please can you critique mine?



Url: http://www.threadless.com/critique/50026/From_The_Begining



Url for Presentation: http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1249343474



Thank You
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