What do you all think?

Sorry I submitted 2 versions, I messed up the title the first time...

Never mind. lol

I like how the fire looks, maybe make the dragon (? Serpent??? ) a little crisper??



If you get a minute, let me know what you think of my design!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/49555/Bloom

I think it's still a little to rough,

I like the idea, it's probably too smudgy for a tee I would try to make it sharper

Yeah same as Ivan, i think it needs a bit more detail and sharpness.. the idea is nice.

I cleaned it up and made it a lot sharper. What do you all think?

Much better!

I really like the concept, but I think you could define the heart a little more. It's kinda hard to make out as a heart...assuming it's supposed to be a heart.

Thanks

Defined the heart some more. What do you all think?

Defined the heart

much better!

I think the dragon needs more texture...

What do you all think?

Interesting.

Could also evaluate my design?

http://www.threadless.com/profile/795468/Winck/critiques

great work ...

like the blurry appearance of v1 ...

think the smudgy appearance adds to the design ...

may be try larger placement and add more details ...

plz critique mine ....

lonely finger...

Cool stuff. Something the got my attention is where the snake is wrapped around the heart, the snake doesn't really look like it's curving. It looks like its straight across and then suddenly bends back around the heart. Does that make sense?



Mind critiquing my design?