for those that remember the Snorks cartoon, they're now bite sized!

Haha, I do remember the snorks! I loved them! The first obvious I'd say would be to add color.



If you have a minute, let me know what you think about my design!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/49555/Bloom

that is the next step, any other suggs?

for those that remember the Snorks cartoon, they're now bite sized!

this is pretty funny! i hadn't thought about snorks in forever.

Thanks!



1 "needs work" vote, any suggestions?

bump

hmmm... well, i can just give you my feeling on this, but it might be totally wrong. so take that for what it is.



i'm having trouble with contrast here. there's not enough or something. especially on the grey, the green just blends in. and the teal seems too dark or something.



how could you get the design to pop a little more? it seems like a light background would blend with the yellow, but a dark would blend with the green. any ideas there?

Try it on a light blue shirt. The illo is perfect.

I will continue to play with the shirt color, thanks!

I sort of liked the gray.. it really made the pastel colors pop. Although the green did sort of disappear.. maybe making it a lighter green like that little blob to the right? Other than that, the only thing I would add would be a shadow under everything. Then I think it's ready for subbing :)

And if you're not too busy, I could sure use some help for my critique!

bump

light blue might work.



any ideas for this? i love vector women