looking for some input here,



1. do you agree with the white outline?

2. should the branches stretch across the entire shirt?

3. colors???!?! what color shirt should this go on?

4. was thinking about adding a speach bubble or two.. ya or no?



hey thanks!

by the way, its hard to see but currently the branches just sort of start to disappear

Okay, so first of all, I love this shirt because I have budgies and this is beautifully drawn and I love the colors. Did you leave their nostrils out on purpose? I would try it without the white outline though and see how it looks. Love it on the blue shirt, the placement is great and the image size is great too. Definitely would NOT add a speech bubble though. I would buy this shirt in a heartbeat!

2. should the branches stretch across the entire shirt?

Yes.

4. was thinking about adding a speach bubble or two.. ya or no?

No.

i think the white should not be there.

but other then that, the color of the shirt is nice, and i adore the birds.

haha nostrils.... ..... so i'll put those on, extend the branches, and get rid of the white and we'll see from there

what is PDA?

I like it! Very nice colouring and I like the cutout look.



I'm looking for some advice too: Nothing but Flowers

This is sweet. Speech bubbles need not be necessary!





VOTE ON MY APPLE!

i like the way it is. sub it.



pls check out mine.



HOOT

ilya yas- PDA is public display of affection.. the two birds on the right are canoodling and the others are all staring..

added nostrils ( i think they look weird)

took away the outline, extended the branches and have a few color/size questions.



is heather gray or light blue best? both?

also, for sizing- normal (all branches visible) larger (branches get cut off) or the wrap around?

added nostrils ( i think they look weird)

took away the outline, extended the branches and have a few color/size questions.



is heather gray or light blue best? both?

also, for sizing- normal (all branches visible) larger (branches get cut off) or the wrap around?

i like the smallest size. i m not sure about color but i always suck at color for my own. i'm impressed by the bird's coloring for sure. how many colors is that? only complaint is that the stripes on the far left two birds areny as good. maybe add more of the stuff under the chin of the third bird to the other ones too.

i was thinking about defining the stripes a little more on a few of the birds in photoshop.. this is watercolor, all together i used yellow blue, blueish green, a little red, black and white. variations between all of them which is why it'll be up for simulated process

I like the watercolor work on this. Try giving it a little more detail, maybe a few speech bubbles, give the illusion that their communicating however not in words but in the objects they see if you know what I mean.



Mind checking out and scoring my design.

http://www.threadless.com/submission/222330/Indigenous_Falcon/showmore,designs

I like the wrap around. This is a good design.



Solid for sure

Usually I like a wrap around design, but for this one I really think I like the other one better. The art work looks very nice, (especially the branch) I think it looks best on the blue tee.



If you could comment and score, that'd be awesome:)

alright, finally