Just finished designing this for New Art. New Ideas and wanted some feedback on it. Basically I wanted to conceal a message in the design but at the same time spontaneously design along the way.



No preliminary pencil sketches at all. I just drew whatever came to my mind or whatever influenced me at the time. Also I didn't allow myself to erase or add anything.



Please let me know what you think or anything i should add . I would appreciate any feedback. Thanks!



Here's a link to a reverse version of the design:

its like wow! you manage to made a sentence out of that.amazing job!!



mind to score my Kings Throne??

needs more real critiques

Just finished designing this for New Art. New Ideas and wanted some feedback on it. Basically I wanted to conceal a message in the design but at the same time spontaneously design along the way.





V2: Fixed grammatical error thanks to staliongsta. Also fixed some readability issues with the letters based on a few comments in the blog





Please let me know what you think or anything i should add . I would appreciate any feedback. Thanks!





Here's a link to a reverse version of the design:

Do you think this needs more colour? Or are you happy with this?

i like the green version a lot better.

makes it easier to read.

like the joke too!

maybe add some more colors?

i don't know, it looks pretty good to me!

I'd say submit!



Could you look at mine?

My Heart Goes Out to You

Hmm the b/w really makes it stand out and its easier to read. I like this teal colour though. Crazy design. I'd submit.

thanks steve. i'm trying to colour it in at the moment to see where I can take it. It'll probably make it harder to read but it'll make the design more interesting though. I'm kinda 40% through it and its already looking much better. version 3 hopefully tomorrow

Just finished designing this for New Art. New Ideas and wanted some feedback on it. Basically I wanted to conceal a message in the design but at the same time spontaneously design along the way.





No preliminary pencil sketches at all. I just drew whatever came to my mind or whatever influenced me at the time. Also I didn't allow myself to erase or add anything.







V3: Added 6 colours to give it more impact.



Please let me know what you think or anything i should add . I would appreciate any feedback. Thanks!





Here's a link to a reverse version of the design:

emm ignore the reverse version link. I've taken it off.

good!

maybe I'm not convinced for the pink, I'd try another colour..

but it's only a preference :P

However very funny! :D

haha! i'm glad you got the joke. Thanks for the comments. lol brightwood. =D



Was trying to go for a bright colour to go with the green and teal. I'm quite happy with the pink but i'll give it a try on different ones and see whether I can come up with something better

anyone?

Amazing! People would definitely buy this.



Mind checking out and scoring my design.

http://www.threadless.com/submission/222330/Indigenous_Falcon/showmore,designs

i like it a lot and i think that the pink is good it gives a little more brightness it would be really dark with out it

check out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/49453/Ice_Queen

Just finished designing this for New Art. New Ideas and wanted some feedback on it. Basically I wanted to conceal a message in the design but at the same time spontaneously design along the way.





No preliminary pencil sketches at all. I just drew whatever came to my mind or whatever influenced me at the time. Also I didn't allow myself to erase or add anything.





Please let me know what you think or anything i should add . I would appreciate any feedback. Thanks!





Here's a link to a reverse version of the design:

changed the pink to an orange-pink colour.

that is sextastic.

i love it in color!

submit NAOW.

THOR COMMANDS YOU TO!
:O

i like it u should submit it

thank you for the ideas i have made a few changes

I really can't think of much to do with it... the colors are amazing, and I love the design!



If you get a minute, let me know what you think of my design!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/49555/Bloom

THIS IS FRICKIN SICK!!!! i love the colors.. i dont see much else that can be done to this. Great lettering... maybe change the title... how bout "take your time"

keep showing subtle changes to us.. the slight tone down of the pink made all the difference from v3 to v4. see what other slight adjustments you can make to make it feel even better.. try some other color shirts

eh..hmm..change the title? hmm..i'll have to brainstorm something similar.



I think i'm happy with the colour scheme now. I've actually cleaned up some of the lines that were messy as well. Going to take it back into Photoshop for recolouring. I might try to add some shading to flesh out the interesting stuff. Thanks Wako for the comments.

i think this is awesome, great job! i like that the color combination make me think of watermelon too!



please vote on mine if you have a chance

Sick! It's got a skater feel to it. I could definitely see this on a shirt.

I really wish I looked good in green, so I could wear this with pride, thats a beautiful design, voted submit now with a request for a version in red, black or light blue :-)

i'll give it a go. At the moment i'm filling in the colours properly and details. Ill play with colour schemes a little soon. Thanks for the commens rey2

Awesome! I do think it could use a different title, though.

how bout Doodleism or Doodle-ism? think it works well with New Art New Ideas

I actually like the title... It might not be understood until you take the time to read the shirt (no pun intended :p) but yeah....

WAKO and ReyRey's comments made me think about the title alot



i actually thought about the title when i was driving to work today. and also Brightwood's comment about my doodle style. so in my head i kept repeating the word doodle, doodle, doodle. Doodleism!



haha THanks sunnie

going to upload V5 soon with all the details. Gonna try it on a different tshirt colour as well.

Just finished designing this for New Art. New Ideas and wanted some feedback on it. Basically I wanted to conceal a message in the design but at the same time spontaneously design along the way.





Also I didn't allow myself to erase or add anything.




Please let me know what you think or anything i should add . I would appreciate any feedback. Thanks!




Here's a link to my blog on this design:



I think this is my final design. Hope you like the colours. Going to change the title to Doodleism instead of Use Wisely

for a more detailed version, visit my blog

Turquoise tshirt look alright?

Yeah the turquoise looks great! Although I liked the green too, why'd you change? Although I noticed this version is more polished, little extra shine here and there, it looks good.



First time seeing this and I was able to read all of it, none of the letters stood out as weird to me. I'm really impressed this melds together so well considering you did it without any erasing (besides the grammar change). Excellent work, sub it and good luck!

I love it. It fits well on either color t-shirt and the design is amazing. I admit I just kinda sat here and stared at it after reading that you didn't erase... Good luck with the competition!!!

Great design, I prefer this colour. Sub it, its awesome!

Please comment on mine.

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thanks guys! i'm pretty happy with this. Pretty much fleshed out all the letters and put in some details on the other elements. I did however clean up the outlines in Photoshop coz some parts were just too messy. And yeah...that English FAIL! Good thing i put it in my blog/critique before submitting it.

Final Version. Flash File check

AWESOME! Love the colours - great slogan too. Are you going to sub it?



Would love some feedback on mine too, if you have time. It's Spotted with a Dr Seuss feel - really my inspiration - Thanks :)

hello kawan! its been a while ;)



awesome Pak Pandir!

i love it tht u dont really see the word 'seconds'...reminds me of those chain emails, claiming if u dont read it, misfortune strikes...cheh...

Great, smart, and nice placement aswell. When this gets printed i'll buy it. We haven't had enough text based designs getting through as of late, so good luck with this one!

Really like the doodle stylee