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Omerican on Jul 23 '09 Here is a version without the typography... its more minimalistic but also harder to read...
the text says: "My friend got bitten by a werewolf and all i got is this lousy gash in my stomach." which is better? |
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olie! on Jul 23 '09 any design where a specific skin color shows underneath is prolly not gonna work too well for everyone
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ginetteginette on Jul 23 '09 whoa, i hardly saw the text in this at all. maybe you should consider making the words a darker shade of read rather than skin because that's sort of weird.
also i'm wondering if this would look a lot nicer if the halftoning was tons smaller. the shadows would look more realistici think. |
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Keep the "werewolf" part of the text of V1 and make the rest of the another font.
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Yea, I can barely read the text here, zoomed in, let alone on a real shirt. I'd either remove it or much much super enlarge it. The design itself is great though! Nice use of halftone.
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is the text legible? too many fonts?
:)