An idea i got from random sketches in class. Popsicle melted. Please comment :)

Yea cool, i like how the teeth are icicles, maybe put some pupils looking down at it and shape the eyes the get more of a shocked expression



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i like it!!..=D...i love the shocked look...simple but good..=]

The idea has been done before but I like the way you illustrated this one. Good work.



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Really? By who O_O ? Woah didn't know.

don't be distraught about it... there's a lot of creative overlap on threadless- almost all innocuous. ;)

Ah i see. But still, a used idea :( I thought it was fresh~

i really like it.simple and nice.



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Kings Throne

Knightmare

Cute! Funny! Domo!



What about angling the eyes so that the still alive one looks more like its looking at the other? At first, you can't tell if it's sad or in KILL MODE!



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Its a really funny concept. I like it!



If you could critique mine that'd be awesome!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/49251/Love_Arrow

Thanks, ikeLawliet, what you meant by that? Like adding another circle inside?

i dont fully get the concept actually. is it just simply his "friend" melted and now he has a crazy look on his face because hes surprised?

Yeah, it was suppose to be that his "friend" is shocked. Thanks. Will try !

that's cute!

Yeah, I think pupils in his eyes would make it a bit clearer.



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My Heart Goes Out to You

i think the ice lolly eyes needs a little bit more detail.. :P cool design!



check this out : (if you like Michael Jackson)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48957/Michael_Jackson#v2

yh, add pupils before you go any further!

best of luck!

wicked design XD

Added an eye as suggested and added a new exclamation mark. What you think bout this one?

Any suggestion?

I like I like. The mouth is bugging me for some reason, but otherwise...

Really? Hmmmm... Like what? I think the eyes are bugging me instead @_@

This is funny. What about putting 2 eyes on the melted "buddy" on the ground...that would be even funnier :)

I think the problem with the mouth is that the shape makes him look more like a growling angry monster - than a sad popsicle.

I think it's the teeth being so jagged maybe?

Very simple, but cool!



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creative surge

yh the mouth needs to be less "angry monster" try just make the teeth solid if you get me? the make the edges straight.

the eyes....i like the eyes.

i think you should add a couple of eyes on the ground :)

Thanks for you guy's brilliant comments. Here's a new version, i changed the teeth as suggested and added a R.I.P. word in the stick also made the eye twitch abit.

Maybe you can change color of ice-cream! Maybe pink!!! Ide is good!



Please, check out and give me critique:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/49816/jO_jO

I really like this. Nice placement. I like the color of the ice cream.



A comment and score would be really awesome!

Color huh, any idea what other colors are nicer?

i like the color of the ice cream as it is.

submit!



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it's funny

i think you should change the color of the melted popsicle... it looked like the stick was broken when i first looked at it... great idea though!



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/48592/Think_More

maybe a bigger puddle where the popsicle melted also would help to seperate the two different posicles puddles



if you have time

http://www.threadless.com/critique/49713/Fifties_Girl

I dont think that the "alive" popsicle's stick should have the R showing, unless the idea is that he shocked/scared that he is melting as well.

I too thought that it was simply a broken stick at first glance so i would either move the "dead" popsicle over or make it a different color, and I really like the twitch of the eye but i think he should be looking straight at his lost friend.



if you have time...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/49901/Let_Me_Live_While_I_m_Young

Thanks, about the sticks. Increasing the puddle would be a great idea!



The R showing actually i wanted it to meant that the alive one would be melted soon too.

I love the concept, and I'm actually okay with the layout and image, but I'd try putting it on sand instead of white



If you have time (and actually like it...)

My Better Half

Gathered all the ideas you guys gave me and made another version. This one is another Popsicle standing and gonna melt :) what da ya think :) ?

No, go back to V3, then submit it, it's awesome..



This one isn't as good.

Hmmm really? Any other people think so too ;/ ?

Hi, I think v3 is better, too.



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http://www.threadless.com/submission/223957/Footsteps

Definately. I think V3 is printworthy.



Good luck!

Good concept.

You can evaluate my design?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50072/ANIMAL_SOCCER

great idea ... nice illustration ...

give it more details, dimensions, more realistic look ...

think would look perfect with yellow design on yellow tee ...

plz critique mine ...

u r ugly ...

As many people suggested that v4 should go back to v3. I took the V3 comments and made this, bigger puddle and changed the color of the puddle. Suggestion from my friend told me to add a



Comment please guys ^^

Wow, this is sweet! Great cartoony breakdown of the popsicles. At first, I wasn't sure about how the pink liquid was connecting with the stick of the blue popsicle, but it really lets the eye travels down and explore the whole design fluidly. The text-based heart could be hit-or-miss, though. It matches that internet-cute-meme style, but at the same time, you know there will be people who will go "Less than 3?"



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Toaster Coaster

hahahahahahaha! This is by ffar one of the most funniest designs i've ever seen!!!!!!!!! muhahaha.

i would seriously just submit it!

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/50081/Sad_amp_Lonely_Grim_Reaper

ahh how adorable i like this version better

HAHAHA! I don't like the shirt color, but I like the design. I might wear it.

Party Foul! $5 Penalty!

awesome! maybe have some remnant of the popsicle in the puddle, like two eyes or X's for eyes.



Please score my design "Think", thanks!

a million times better :)

instead of the

can you not change the colour of the tee? i hate white. and it defo puts people off.

yup it's amazing ! i well buy it!

the expression and concept is great. submit it.

ahahahaha love it! maybe try different color tees to make some contrast between the bright colored popsicles and the background. you could add a white outline around the popsicles if it doesn't look right.

funny yet cute, i like it

Sub. Try some color tee's.

This looks much better on the photographed shirt than it does in the purely digital version. Use that to your advantage when you submit, and show the principal image of the design on a real shirt.

give him a melty tear. :)

i think i like it a bit better when he's looking down, like in an older version. sorry if that sounds counter-productive :o

Pahaha, this made me giggle.

I like it, but if you wanted to change something, making him look down at the puddle wouldn't be a bad idea.

Still, this is terribly cute.

You need to sub this NOW because someone just subbed a design that looks exactly like this of a popsicle eating two others.

maybe some light wood grain on the popsicle stick. personally i think the eye's work either way. it's a tough call.

csimpson8 @ Thanks, i still have this last version my friend suggested x(.



What you think? This or the previous version?

I can't decide... this one adds that something extra but i'm not sure if it needs it. Whilst everything else has those white curves on the edges, giving it a round and slightly 3d feel the pink undies are slightly flat, maybe give them a slight shadow or make slightly darker... and maybe add a bra?



Looking good though!

I'm a big fan of version three, but if you're going to stick with this I think the panties are a little weird, because if the popsicle were whole, she'd be wearing them on her head? Maybe I'm just thinking too hard...



Any thoughts on mine? Learning To Fly

v5 sub already.

i like v5, the panties are too much i think, like frauleinkatrina said.

Thanks guys :) v5 i'll sub then ^^

yeah v5 - the pink was a nice touch over v4 but i think the underwear on the stick is just one little step too far.

did you ever explore other shirt colour options?

this is awesome! lol

Heh, this is almost like "What happens next" after things get too "hot" in Pokedstudio's Ice Cream Love design.

yeah...sub v5. good job on the illo. really funny/(sad)...

like it. maybe some option for the tee-color?



and ...uh...thx for your comment, but:

what exactly is a gas dispenser?

greetz. moe

sorry, i meant those erm things that release gas? XD forgot what is it called.



I forgot to try other tee and submitted ._.

In my opinion:

-there must be more contrast.

-you should take out the

-you shpould insert some melted eyes on the pink icecream

- maybe the pantie must be stronger in color/contrast

- maybe the blue icecream's eye must be on pointed to the panties



critique my double hug

- you shpould take out that HEART character

argh i was so distracted that i submitted it ._.



Now that i think i've so many things that i haven't tried yet.

Send 'em an email. Perhaps you can get it pulled? I also vote for v5. Gotta lose those panties.

Crit mine?

yup it is very nice!