Just a simple line drawing of some pigeons at a drive in...

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Maybe you should continue the cars coming out onto the shirt. Make them get bigger and bigger until they reach the bottom? Just a thought. I really like the idea!!!

This is cute. I like the simplicity of it. I don't think the cars should go any lower but maybe another row on the pigeon side of the screen (left side). It looks a little lopsided to me.



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maybe add one more row on the pigeon side.it could balance the picture..

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This is wonderful!



I agree with the others that say more cars on the right.



Also, maybe the birds should be mimicking what's on screen? If you like the onscreen kiss, maybe they should kiss. Or if you like the bird putting his arm around her, maybe they do that on screen, too? I think the parallelism there would push this shirt over the top. Well done!



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I like the birds mimicking the onscreen action idea, also perhaps the outline of the screen should be white as well, and just the hearts and the people kissing in red.



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Much better, and I like that the pigeons are kissing. Very cute!!!

i love that the characters on screen are in red!!!

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Soooo cute!!! I think I would maybe tighten the cars up a bit. Make the lines cleaner like the birds. Just a thought...

wow ... love the concept ... great idea man ..

make the rope birds standing on something from real life ...

may be a tree branch or electrical wire ...

and add some details ad colors ...

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I added tones to the pigeons, so they really pop now. What do you all think?





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Im liking this a lot, the pigeons look great! $5

i think this is great. what the pigeons are sitting on is unclear, but it works. Please help me out, Zombie Punk

Make the ribbon (?) a phone wire or something. And maybe the actress's arm should be on the actor's shoulder to mimic the pigeon's wing? ;-)



Then this is just an idea that might fail: should the cars' brake lights be red? See how that looks maybe. It might draw too much attention, but it might also balance the colors better.

Then this is just an idea that might fail:? who do you think you are?



So, it is a little unclear what they are sitting on, but other than that i think it's a great concept!

Er, I don't think that's what psykomakia meant - they meant that their own idea about the car's brake lights might fail.



As for me, I think I'd like to see just a little space between the pigeons and the cars. I find the perspective a little confusing. Telephone poles might definitely help.

Aww, very cute! I think you should add a bit of white to the faces on screen, to further detail and emphasize them. Also, maybe a little more detail to the closer cars, so they don't seem like outlines?



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I updated the color, and touched it up! What do you all think?

I really like the color change!

cute :) , but the movie kissing silhouette is very hard to see.. maybe make the line a bit wider



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I agree it is cute, but the people on the screen are hard to read! And, I like the color behind them, but than it's really dark on the shirt? don't understand...

I agree with the above comments, a little more weight on the couple on the screens outline. Fab design, I like it.



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nice one. but why not goe with a lighter color for the screen? Right now the contrast with the t-BG-color seems a little too harsh. agree on the couple-outline. needs to have more weight.

Other than that it's fabolous. I'd say do those minor changes and submit it!

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I like it, but I think that the screen seems to provide a lot of negative space.