A day off, with differences aside, Good & Evil go to the playground.

This is quite a cute concept. Good job!

This is good. It's just my opinion, but I think t-shirt art should be more graphic and this is a nice design for a shirt. Sometimes people tend to over illustrate work because of Affliction, but I personally don't prefer that.



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thnx for the comments so far. btw it is an 8 color shirt.



i was thinking puff ink for the two characters, anybody agree or disagree with that idea?

I figured it would make them standout better against the background.



feedback is appreciated.

also i dont really like it on white or navy blue but i figured i would leave it as an option. let me know what color shirt u like! personally i think i like cream or the light gray.

THats really cool!! I have nothing to add, gotta tell you to submit it!! ^^



I'd really aprecciate an opinion here

the concept's really nice :)

It's just that the hollow eye & tongue (or it just seems that way because it's white on white) is not that easy to recognize. :(

Interesting concept, although I might try it on a black tee to make the colours stand out more.

i thought about a black tee but i already have the max colors and it would have been a lot of changing the colors around in order for it to work on black, i do agree is theory it would work on black

f#@k it im gonna submit it. thanks for the feedback, remember by looking at this shirt you have agreed to give this a $5 or face a fine and or imprisonment.

does anybody know what the springy animal playground toy is called?

I like this design. Sorry I dont know the name you are talking about. The angel looks a bit scary but I think the artwork and execution is great. I'll be looking for this in the submission section.



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thanks xcarno... lol yeah i was going for scary/creepy. i wanted the overall design to be a little unsettling.

Wow, I totally love it--it's awesome!!! BUT I hope you didn't sub it yet b/c your shadow is off!! Under the devil's seat--the left vertical line of the shadow should be parallel to the edge of the teeter-totter board. Do you understand what I mean?? I suck at explaining stuff--does anybody else see it?? But seriously just fix that and it's utterly perfect!

damn i got antsy and submitted it. i was getting so aggrivated with the shadow i eventually just stopped, but i know what u mean. lets se what happens. thanx!!!

Hey, alot of people never said anything about it before me. The shadow's not a huge eye-grabber. I'm sure it will do well.:)



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