a dead storm trooper riding in on a horse with no name. taking an artistic visual cue from the art of the dead native american on a horse.

i like the idea but the back of the horse looks kinda weird.

critique mine??

Hello :)



Why a stormtrooper?



Please crit mine back!

The back end of the horse is the tail blown over the back legs, I might play with it, but it's iconic art I'm referencing, so I don't want to alter it too much.



And I chose a stormtrooper because I enjoy mixing americana art with pop culture art.

the back does look a bit weird - if you're just referencing iconic art and not mimicking it, then you should be able to make the horse clearer without changing the effect to much.

as for the storm trooper - i'm not certain he really looks dead as much as he's slouching or sleeping. i personally didn't think dead when i saw him. could he be slumped a bit more, maybe kind of over to one side.



i dunno, maybe the issue is i'm not directly familiar with what you're referencing so I'm not getting it immediately.

i love the idea of merging the the two art culture's though - there could be a lot in this - i just think this particular design needs a bit more work.



i could do with some comments on my pot and kettle if you would be so kind, thanks

mixing the "end of the trail" art with pop culture art.



please tell me if you like V1 or V2 better.

Definetly V2.!! looks sweet! :D

but if they pulled "Dark side of the garden" im afraid this is gonna have some problems too :/



If you can crit. mine...

Pessimus Prime

Did dark side..." get pulled?!



That's been up for YEARS!



I may have to try my hand at another establishment if that's the case.

They did indeed pull Dark Side. They were working on a resolution, dont know what ended up happening.

Oh noes! I can't believe they pulled that.. I liked that shirt lol.. And I think this will have troubles if Dark Side got pulled.. Worth a shot though, I would continue with this design and hope for the best.

Looks great btw, I lol'd. I say sub it. And if it gets declined for the same reason Dark Side got pulled then I agree, try another place. This design has to get printed somewhere.

And if you're not busy, a comment for my first submission would be much appreciated!

Nuts, I'll just take this elsewhere, rather than wait a week for a decline.



That's too bad about "Dark Side..." That design was as minimal as possible. Threadless is too big I guess. I wonder how Glennz other printed vader design from his own store is fairing?