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Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jul 13 '09
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jul 13 '09
a nicotine addicted gorilla ridin' a reigned shark.



hell yeah.
efe1347
efe1347 on Jul 13 '09
maybe give the cig some smoke

help me out

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Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jul 14 '09
hell yeah bump.
pixls
pixls on Jul 14 '09
yeah, the cig needs some smoke, and i think the background thing needs some work. maybe instead of just fast lines, have some kind of exciting burst! i dunno what you used for this, so i don't know how easy it'd be to change it, but as it is, the gorilla, although pleased, seems a bit too chill, as does the shark. maybe were it a more leaping exciting kind of thing, it might be better, but honestly, i lol'd, thanks for making this.



would you be so kind as to check out/score my design?
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