any good suggestion?

any good suggestion?

any good comment??!!

CHANGE style !!

i wll add something into the ACE!

any good suggestion??

Hello :)



I think it would look better if inked





Please crit mine back!

Hmm,

Can't really see the concept behind it. Where were you trying to go with it, or was it just a joker image you wanted to use?



If you have time, please critique mine?

maybe some details on that joker.u can put that joker poking the cards with his head.

critique mine??

maybe some details on that joker.u can put that joker poking the cards with his head.



this is my conecpt!!

i am trying to do this,

but i want take more suggestion there!!

Some change,

any good suggestion?

The changes look good. I'd try maybe cleaning up the lines a bit.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/48814/Keyboards

like the new one.maybe try making some line cleaning..



mind to score??

but the line is style ...

nice one!!

nice one!

i will make hte line change to thin little bit

I see the joker has become the ace of spades :P I think this would be better on a tee colour that matches his clothes colour better :)



Last day of my design please comment :)

i see!

i will try to change the colour next time!

maybe white is well