THAT DO YOU THINK?

Make the butter and jelly more distinct. Like, have the butter in a butter dish (cuz right now, it looks like pudding). The jelly... thats supposed to be jell-o right? I'd just make it a can of jelly. Its a great idea though.

BETTER?

i like the idea.

i would have to say, change the jello to the jelly jar.

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something someone?

so...comments please

much better

now you should make the presentation. [i.e placement on the shirt, other color options, etc.]

also i'm trying to count the colors & i think you used more than 5.

i have to say i liked the jelly on the plate better. it made it more unique and quirkish. the jar is obviously jelly and so you're not letting anyone figure out what you're saying. just telling them. but i would like to see the comp. on the shirt.

click on the orange t!...

ok.

i would suggest testing more colors, and for the orange shirt in the corner, make it yellow so people wouldn't be surprised to see a yellow shirt.

Black, orange, light orange, white, grey, light yellow. 6 colors

sorry

I think the yellow's meant to be the yellow of the shirt. Cute idea. Looks good on the shirt.

now???

Very cute!! Good colors, too, maybe make the jelly just a bit smaller, since it really jumps out at you

thankS...:P



anything more before im sending it?

make it 8:26 instead of 3:01

If you can, I suggest making the jelly purple. But if you can't (I'm too lazy to count all the colors), then i think it's perfect. I'd definitely wear it.

i like everything except the jelly glass - i prefered it on a plate. if it was purple, it would be amazing!! i love the design and the concept itself. however, i think you exceed the 5 color limit??

1.grey 2.white 3.black 4.orange 5.light orange...

5 mate...

ok, so you certainly couldn't have the jelly purple :(



however i count 6 colours

1. grey 2. white 3. "black" 4. dark orange 5. light orange 6. yellow

the t is yellow so it isnt count as a color mate

i like reading stuff that makes my mind like work out puzzles and stuff and then where I laugh later with it...Now when I was in Long Island growing up (originally from the city) My 5th grade class went on a school trip to Old Bethpage. See Bethpage is a modern town in Long Island, but Old begthpage is a museum which when after you pay you enter and walk into the 1600's and shit you feel like Laura Ingalls is gonna come out and hug your ass, anyway, they take us into a few houses and different rooms, and one room they had this woman who would make Peanut Butter and Jam sanwiches and tell us how they in the farm would produce and sell it in jars to locals etc...she totally dissed the city folks saying, "No you never say jelly, see jelly is the rush city thing, it's artificial, and you need to refrigerate it quickly, and it's like placing jello gelatin, on bread eewww nasty, you want real grapes then it's jam that you want, and you can place this jar in the cupboards and it will never go bad...Jam is richer, thicker spread yet smoove, not gelatin like jelly eeewww.

i like reading stuff that makes my mind like work out puzzles and stuff and then where I laugh later with it...Now when I was in Long Island growing up (originally from the city) My 5th grade class went on a school trip to Old Bethpage. See Bethpage is a modern town in Long Island, but Old begthpage is a museum which when after you pay you enter and walk into the 1600's and shit you feel like Laura Ingalls is gonna come out and hug your ass, anyway, they take us into a few houses and different rooms, and one room they had this woman who would make Peanut Butter and Jam sanwiches and tell us how they in the farm would produce and sell it in jars to locals etc...she totally dissed the city folks saying, "No you never say jelly, see jelly is the rush city thing, it's artificial, and you need to refrigerate it quickly, and it's like placing jello gelatin, on bread eewww nasty, you want real grapes then it's jam that you want, and you can place this jar in the cupboards and it will never go bad...Jam is richer, thicker spread yet smoove, not gelatin like jelly eeewww.

oops the part about working out puzzles and laughing later i was referring to your shirt design

oops the part about working out puzzles and laughing later i was referring to your shirt design

so i would change the jar from jelly to jam for me, jelly sounds better but i'm a jam person.

love the shirt idea but the word jelly would have to be changed to JAM for lil ol me...