do you get the idea?

peace sign vs devil horns sign



any comments?

I'm not sure about the title... any?

any comments here?

cool concept. As of now, it kind of looks like they're standing back to back or walking away from each other. Maybe if you made it look like they were poised to fight some way. Dare I say, add some wrinkles that would make it look like they have faces?



The black stroke is a little heavy imo, as well.

I really really like it! But maybe the devil sign must be red, like the devil? Really nice illustration and lines..



Can you comment on my submission? Thnx!

Really good idea. Strong design.



I know you're using the fingers as legs, but I'd flip both of them right way up so people get the peace sign and devil sign immediately.



I'd also put a 'vs' between them-- boxing poster style.



If you've got the time, I'd appreciate it if you could score my designs:

Never mind the tigers and

Pre-loved Kitties

yeah pose them like they are ready to rip each other apart, as for the weight i think you're fine with the heavy one. i like it on a grey shirt, makes me think they both have a fair chance.



help me out with my critique

Yeah, what Tigerbill says, it kinds of comes across as two "Things" from the Addams family, I didn't even notice the difference in finger-pose until reading about it.

Ok I took some notes, this is what a get with all the backfeed



option 1, Im not sure about this, Its looks no that badass



option 2 (wooo the faces are so horrible) its just an idea



please I need some help here.... any?



thanks for al the nice backfeed on V1 guys

bump

hola?

I like option 1, and will raise you another strange idea:



Put it together like the selection screen of a fighting game, with a different hand gesture for each "fighter"...including a "secret character" box that looks strangely like a middle finger...

lol great idea the middle finger, thanks shok xone



any other??

I'm with Shok. This could really work. Great drawing.





Score my design?

yeah thanks

Really liking Option 1-- like you read my mind! Grey tee would be awesome.



Shok's idea is pretty interesting. You could make the unselected characters silhouettes of hands and include characters like Rock, Paper, Scissors, Thumbs up, Birdy, Gun, etc.



That said, what you have as Option 1 is a really polished, nice-looking, easy to 'read' shirt.

PS - Colour choices are perfect.

woow thanks dude, I really like the "mortal kombat" idea, thanks for the characters

Wow!! Great idea!, I like option 1 and I'm with Shok and Tigerbill. The "Mortal Kombat" concept could work really awesome!!. I'll looking forward to see next version!



If you have a moment, it will be good to hear your comment

Now is mine

SOME CHANGES HERE



ANY COMMENTS?



AND ANY TITLE SUGGESTION?

I believe we have a winner.



As for titles...is "Thumb War" taken?

creativity at its best!

Brrrrap! Blows the first version out of the water, daughter.

Love it! Title needs to go though? Maybe, Mortal Thumbat? LOL

Nah, title works. It doesn't HAVE to be a pun to work on threadless, only 87% of the time....

I think I've got your title: "Fisticuffs"! Get it?

yeah, thanks guys,

uuummmm... I want something with HAND in the title



what about the fighter names? any others?

yeah, thanks guys,

uuummmm... I want something with HAND in the title



what about the fighter names? any others?

Nice i like this version alot!

id maybe make the stroke aorund the two main hands a bit thinner IDK...

cant htink of any titles, at the moment :/

thanks, any other?

Hah, really funny! I think it's juuuust about ready for submission, just that maybe the left hand should be a different colors so it's brighter- at the moment the right hand overshadows it. Very cool!



If you don't mind, would you look at my Panda?

"Unarmed combat"? Because, you know, they've hopped off the arms and that?



.....I'll get me coat.

Looks awesome man. You've done a top job. Maybe 'Digital Combat'... because the hands have digits....





Time is running out for scoring on my design. If you haven't already done so, I'd appreciate it if you could vote for Never mind the tigers

yeah, thanks, uummmhh..."digital fighters" ¿?



and about the fighters name, any other suggestion?



thanks

¿?

Here they are

THE DUCK, MR F. YOU, D. HORNS (other?), DR BANG, MR SPACE, DON OK (other?), SIR THUMB (other?), PEACEBOY (other?), BIRD BROS.

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Hi! Great one, we have a winner, yes!!!

Well, maybe "War is in our hands" would work, what do you think?

Cheers!!!

The fighters names are great. I like Mr. Space, but maybe something related with "vulcano" would work too.

Cheers again!

nice one, thanks

Excellent drawing and solid concept. I'd agree with Ike about the right hand being dominant, maybe lighten up the other a bit. I think you might try a different configuration in grouping the smaller hands. Just having them in a row will really limit the size they can be on the tee. Maybe a row of 4 with a row of 5 underneath. That would keep the eye circling around the design rather than just going from left to right. I think if you angle the 2 big hands into more of a pyramid shape, it would help the eye movement as well. I'm not sure of the text, "Choose your finger", it doesn't seem to add anything. Maybe lose it, but I'm the only one bringing that up, you're call. Anyway, great illo and idea. Cheers!

woow, nice comment quister, I'll try to make the rows to get a better placement on the tee.

Is the text necesary or not, I'm not sure...

thanks for the backfeed



any other before I make some changes?

ok, new Version, I fixed some things here

I'm not sure about the text "CHOOSE YOUR FIGHTER!!!" and "CREDIT - 01"

what about "Choose your fighter" for title



any comments??

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Very nice. The progression through the critiques has been impressive. I think it is ready to submit. My only comment would be to 8-bit the hands also, but that would be a lot of work and wouldn't really add anything. I would also like to see some different color shirt options. Nice work!

thanks, so... with or without the text

hahah this is awsome! love the concept! really like your colour choice and illustraitions!

I'd say if you're going with, "choose your fighter", maybe arc the type so it's more part of the design and not so straight forward. I think you might also highlight the text, "HELL ZOMBIE" and "PEACE DUDE" rather than highlight the hands above them. Don't know for sure but maybe worth a try. I still say you're better off with a 4 and 5 row configuration just from a design point of view, your call though. I don't think you need the "credit" text but I could be wrong, see what others say. Cheers!

Doncha love how people ignore direct questions? I like it with the text. I think if you get rid of part of the text, it would look incomplete to have the "titles" under each fighter choice. I guess I'm saying, all or none with the text.



Otherwise, looks fantastic! The only thing I would change is putting the "good" player choices down the side on the good side and the "evil" player choices down the left side so there is a very clear distinction between the two... But that would be minor.

wooow thanks guys nice comments

any other?

this is really cool, great idea nicely executed.

i like the text, agree wth quister about arcing the 'Choose your figher' line. Keep the credits line.

The only one that for me looks a little odd is Bird Bros, who is made from 2 hands, unbalances slightly since all the others are made with just one. Maybe it could be the scout sign or something instead?

new version, some things new too,

I changed some names on the fighters, and positions too, I arc the text at the top,



I kind of like the bird bros. even they are two hands... what do you think... should I change him to a V sign, crosssed fingers or a loser sign?



thanks!

Sir Subsalot.

nice! thanks

so now is ready?

Yes! I think is amazing!



Please check my design: http://www.threadless.com/critique/48570/City_Dream

thanks, any other comment?

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any? good names for the fighters?

maybe you should put the characters on the back of the shirt to kinda clear up some of the clutter on the front.

love this! very clever...looks ready to me



please check out mine: night vision

any other names for the fighters?

bump

its ready man go for them!



crit mine!!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/48441/Monsters_Inc

HAHA! I love it! Go submit!



vote for me? http://www.threadless.com/submission/220085/Three_dimensions_of_terror

how about the shocker?



let me know what you think

some changes here, any feedback please



thanks

Hi mpeon!

I really love this one!

I love the new blue and the new distribution of the fighters. well, i think Dr. Bang and Space boy are mixed up, it's that or i missed somthing.

Anyway, the only thin i coul suggest it's to take other color for the 2P arrow, maybe red or something.

Cheers!

(by the way, i have a new critique "Bath time", please take a look if you can)

wooo ups, yea thats true i mixed up the fighters



about the color for the arrows I dont wanna add anotherone they are allready 6, maybe I'll make it light grey



thanks

It doesn't seem to me that Threadless is that bothered about the amount of colors used, lately a lot of very colorful designs get printed. Having said that I don't think the addition of a color just for the arrows is necessary ( unless you also used it for the text at the bottom) a red or yellow?

mmmm yellow for the text... maybe can work that way... or making the gray a special ink



thanks for the help dude

Hi, you're welcome!

Well, i suggets to take another color for the 2P arrow because in the arcade games the arrows are colored in different colors.

I don't think special ink would help. I don't know why.

just a funny idea, censore Mr. F You, a lots of fun!!!!

some yellow here



any feedback please?



thanks

mmmmm I'm thinking.... should I add more characters?

V sign

Cross fingers

a 3 sign

a Fist

a surfer sign (shaka)

the shoker

even a Foot (as the bad guy)



7 more....



what do you think, is it worth

bump

idea is cool. place on real Tee and we'll see need you something more.

maybe need to separate arena (fight zone) and player menu?

maybe need to see options of chosen player?

what chosen players?

Surfer and shocker please, but unsure about the selection-ovals. Maybe just give them a halo or photoshop stroke around the edges, if you know what I mean? Lastly, minor thing, any chance of a bit more space between Hitchi and King? Took me ages to get that name....

haha, yeah, its suposed to be "hitchhiking" so I made it "hitchhi king"

Yeah, that's what I'm saying, it just looks like one word, unlike the rest of them where you can make out the name first time. speaking of names, maybe change "Mr Space" to "Spaceman"? Just on accounts of having another Mr character in there, adds a bit more variety....

NEW FIGHTERS and placement

The title it's gonna be CHOOSE YOUR FIGHTER!!!

I like this one, I think its the lastone before submit



thanks guys

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Hmmm not really much I can say here to improve it. Unless anyone comes up with a significant improvement I'd submit this.

I rather enjoy this version! Very funny. I think you should submit this one.

lol i like it submit!



please crit mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48752/Even_Good_amp_Evil_Get_a_day_off

Im not sure about THE SHOKER, isn't offensive?

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hello??

The Shocker is one of those things where I think most of the people who would be offended just aren't going to get it.



Plus, you can increase your appeal to one demographic by potentially offending another.



I think this one's ready to go.

Hi! I think is ready too, lke the yellow and the placement is cool!

This is ready to go mate, great job!

if you get chance:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/48715/The_Dead_80s



nice one

yeah thanks guys, any other?

This is really funny! Don't know if there is any way to improve it...or maybe change colours between Player 1 and 2 (1p and 2p) to make it more obvious...



Can you help me on my design??

this is turning out great!

the foot seems out of place..

maybe you could replace it for the hand sign for "love", which isnt really a fighter, but it could be a bit funny... idk.. either way great execution on this one! love the 8bit fonts....

Can you call Mr. F You -- Master FU instead?? I think it would be funnier b/c it's a play on Kung-Fu but the hand gesture gives away the real meaning. I don't think anybody will get bent out of shape over the Shocker thing.



Love it though! GReat design!



check mine?

ywah thanks guys, about the foot... all fighting games has a "monster", in this game is a foot =)

i like the Master FU idea a lot then you could do Mr. Luck as Luck Luck just seems kind of weak compared to the rest. is Shocker spelled Shoker on purpose? other than that i think it's really cool and ready to go.

hooo thats, good idea, and yes, I miss a C on Shocker, thanks dude



MASTER FU or MASTER F. YOU?

MASTER FU. It's funny and obvious, trust me.

another random idea, maybe sir. punch could be col. punch, kind of a play on colon punch if that wasn't obvious.

or kid punch, i duno i'm just thinking out loud here.

haha Col. for Coronel?

Hey....submit it!...its too good....



If u have the time...pls critique my design:

This is the link:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48754/LoSt_DiSCo

I think it's time to sub this now. You've made us all very very proud.

yeah i think this is just about ready for submission I like the idea above about more pun like names and i agree it would be nice if the player one and player 2 were different colors i didn't even notice them.



If you get a chance could u please critique mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48751/To_Love_Is_To_Be_Vulnerable

this is a really good idea!!!

so the only thing u should do is change the shoker thing

submit this it is great

check out my design

Great work man, awesome illo! I love the additions but maybe not the foot, don't know for sure, it is kind of quirky and definitely adds a bit of fun to it. It's your call but if you decide to lose it maybe a karate chop hand with a reference to ninjas or the (I forget what they called it) cupped hand that kills Bill in the end of "Kill Bill". Anyway, really illo! Cheers!

yeah col. for Colonel, which is one of those super weird words that's pronounced 'kernal', but i just think it's funny how it kind of doubles for a colon abbreviation and the military ranking. i think this is pretty much there though, if you just make some of the minor tweaks people have mentioned i think you've got a great shot.

thaaaanks for the backfeed

ok, the little changes are going to be:



1.- I'll change THE SHOCKER for A DOG, NINJA or BUNNY sign

2.- Luck Luck is going to be SR. SUERTE (they are always a mexican fighter)



thanks guys, a lot!

bump

Last submit



I fixed some little things, I changed "THE SHOCKER" for "EL PERRO" (There's always a mexican fighter) and mr punch name to "MAYOR FIST"



and I add some badass music to the flash design



thanks guys a lot, loved your feedback

This is great! Got that old school gaming feel to it. I don't know how well Mr. F. You will go over (I personally like it, dont know about threadless).



If you have the time

yeah thanks, I'm going to submit now

good stuff.



plz comment on mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48828/colourful_bliss

thx