I don't know to put it up on scoring or not, so i need comments and suggestions that maybe i could improve it.

It's amazing as is. I do suggest expanding the colors to cover more of the tee. Use those streaks on the right as a directional guide, perhaps.



Also, stick with the darker version; the light one just doesn't look right.

I agree with ShotXone that the darker version looks better.

BUT i also think the other one could look as good in a black shirt.

Awesome design, btw.

I also agree that the darker one looks better, I like the lighter colors but I don't think there's enough contrast to separate the king from the colors.



This is amazing.

maybe try the light one on a black or dark colored shirt.

wow..very strong! go the dark one def! i love the effects uve used around the crown...how was that achieved?

thnks evryone.i appreciate it a lot.

to: crypha-"im using photoshp to make the effect"

i dig ur abstract style. but if i may suggest, try not to use too much black...perhaps, play around with the basic colors..cmyk ;)

perhaps start frm there.



thanks for ur crit on singha

the dark one is nice! but maybe try it on a another background colour instead of white? (just to play ard) the lighter one its kind of hard to see, maybe put it on another colour so you can see the white pain effect? Overall, still prefer the dark one :)



ps. tks for ur critque!

thats pretty sweet, i like the dark one aswell....

I would try out a black colored tee, and make the colors somewhat brighter. cool effects you made.

thanx for your crit on mine ;)

Thanks for critiquing mine!



I like the dark one as well. If you do the light one tho, I'd get rid of the black inside. I especially like the crown :)

wow supah! ;) , like the theme! creepy cool

Nice color! I have to go against popular belief. I think I prefer the lighter one. I suggest reconsidering the amount of black in both versions. There seems to be a happy medium between the two designs that could really push your design to a whole new level.



I could use some suggestions:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48222/Legal_Tender



Cheers!

thanks for giving me some feedback on mine. i like this i just think it could use a little more refinement. experiment with the line work and i think you might find a better end result.

Niiiice! I like alot! Nice choise of colors and awesome effects :) You should go with the darker one, but I agree with a-monkey-in-a-box on that the lighter one could look good on a black tee.

Very intriguing design and nicely rendered. I'd make sure to post another tee color along with the white because there's a lot of white tee haters, (stains easier, grays with washing, makes me look fat, white tees are from gift shops, Wal-Mart, etc.). The only other thing you might try, is losing the vertical spike coming from the chin. It might be just me but I think it inhibits the rhythm/flow of the design, your call. Oh, and maybe move the head placement a bit more away from the arm pit so it's not lost in the folds. Anyway, really cool illo, should do well in scoring. Cheers!

I like the dark one better, the colors are great too.





http://www.threadless.com/critique/48292/Cell_Smile

I love this design, but I agree it might be best on a darker shirt, perhaps grey if you don't want to chamge the design too much

thanks everyone!! I'll try to put it on black tee soon.

is it going to be a digital direct to garment print or a screen?

Love how the title really fits the design. and its cool how the hand looks against the red.

love the design! creepy in an amazing way! but i agree that the colors should cover more of the shirt. make them more prominent

and thanks for critiquing mine!

I improve the colors and the illo a bit.

Here goes the black tee!!

Tell me what u think.

FUCK! Eyepoping colors dude!! I really like the versiion on the black tee! I think you are ready to sub man!



Can you comment on my submission? Thnx!

yeah the black one looks great i think you're good to go!

nice catch!

on black. done.

thats very effective, the colours and design just jumps out at you and catches your eyes.



i can see the structure of the image, not sure exactly what it is, if thats the intention???



i can see the crown and shape of face/outline and ribs etc

This is crazy, I think it's ready for subbing. I prefer the white on black, but putting both options in the final submission can't hurt.

And if you're not busy, a comment on my first submission would be very much appreciated!

im thinking to start putting in on scoring soon but im not sure bout it.So, any opinions??

damn!! i cant take my eyes of it!! Black one!!

Just sub it!! im ready to wear it!!

Wow, very cool! I think that black looks better of the two, though they're both awesome. Submit!



If you don't mind, would you look at my Panda?

very intense, i'd keep it as is

Sub the black, sub it until your fingers bleed.

Wow! This is incredible. Ignore that dude who told you it needs work and submit that thing!

i suggest u put it on an actual tee model and sub it :)

Black tee is a much better read. I like the ghosting but I don't know if that would be a problem for printing.

yeah thats ready for subbing if you ask me

i like the white shirt but lots of people here are saying black so id suggest putting up both options in your sub

cheers for critiquing mine

nice winged skeletal bird! flashy brightness.

if u don't mind :

Garden Gnome Power

The white on black looks really cool

would you mind, http://www.threadless.com/critique/48511/Robot

Looks really really cool, I think you're ready for submission



If you're not too busy can you check out my designs?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48588/SuperPower

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48582/Fall2095

i would totally buy this on black.



if you have time, check out mine.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/48521/Man_and_Alien

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48527/Alien_Discovery

Definitely on the black. I could see you selling this as an album cover to a heavy metal band. The design might be too big for the shirt though. I mean... can it extend on to the neck like that? I would hate to see such a great shirt rejected for such a technicality!



Would you mind looking at my critique ? Your last comment really helped me out and I would appreciate your opinion on my revision.

submit this.

really.



Help me with my critique?

the blending of colors on the black looks realy cool ^^ like it!

check me out on my critique tnx!

http://threadless.com/critique/48608/DJ_Rock

The black tee version is amazing, though the luminosity will probably be lost in the translation to shirt. Graphically its a phenomenal design though.

Black for sure.

at last, pending for approval!!

dont forget to vote when its up!!



arigatou gozaimatsu!! (thank u)

hey man its well made....I kind of agree with the black one, its cool....nothing I don't disagree on

once again, another stunning design! awesome!!

Hey thanks for your help with mine, really useful comments



I do like this on the black as well, sub it I say!

i would buy the white one... very nice!!



check out mine please!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/48441/Monsters_Inc

oops its scary i think need some litle more work...



can u kindly please check my design and comment
Perfect night!!



thanks

I would totally buy that...pretty cool

very nice but somehow seem off? the placement maybe? Other than that the design is awesome.

Is this already subbed?? If not, SUB SUB!



What happens in THE MAGIC MANSION, stays in THE MAGIC MANSION!

I'd place it a little more to the right, way cool design. I like it on black!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/48814/Keyboards

Finally, its on the scoring list!!



Score for it!!:

Kings Throne

AWESOMEEEE!!



If you like Michael Jackson.. Hope you like this T-shirt:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48957/Michael_Jackson

ya truly cool indeed.submit

Why isn't this subbed yet!!!???? SUB! Looks awesome dude!



Would really appriciate it if you would comment on my sub!

Hey good one. Now submit it. And if you don't mind look at my updated version of my t shirt. http://www.threadless.com/critique/48797/Tea_party_USA

submit. well done.

ive submitted it...

Kings Throne??

i've scored kings throne. Pls apologize that i put a link to my design in there, please ignore it.



Thank you for your comment on my design, please give feedback on the latest update.

Def on white tee!! So cool!! Check out my new version of my tee..

on the second look... printed on black is better :) nice effects...



i hope you can find time to score and comment on my works :)



thanks a lot!