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Looks a bit like a hyena to me, think the ears got oversized.

just the ears?

Yes, I agree with the above statement, looks like a hyena.

I think that both ears and muzzle have to be modified.

But I love the idea, the typo and the colours.



Can you vote on my design??

I would say lose the text and just put him dead center. He is great by himself.

yea i really like the idea/design! but they're right it could use a little retouching to make it more like a bear...

yeah but I need the text, I'll tetouch him to look more bear like

Cool, see how it looks if you remove the darker colouring around the mouth/lips. Bears aren't renowned for visible libs.

I think if you alter the nose it'll instantly appear more bear-like. Overall I think it's a tight design with a vintage feel. Nice.

ok, some changes here,

I changed some little things, and the ears to



thanks guys

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i love it! it's great

(ps your bump worked)

return the favour please :)

thanks

any other comment?

Ha ha. I like your sense of line. The colors could be played with a little. A redder brown would help the bear on the green shirt for instance. The shades as of right now leave something to be desired. And the text is too even... in my humble opinion! I would alter the spacing and size of the text a little bit, to make it a bit more varied from line of text to line of text. Otherwise, very nice.



Would you mind looking at my critique ?

YES! Great style, concept, and typography. I would buy this.

yeah thanks, any other?

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i think it's good and could be submitted as is. it might be fun to see his whole body though and have him leaning against a tree or something.



Garden Gnome Power

I agree with cigammon it seems to be cut with sisors... iwould do the rest of the body.

great design! i say submit it...



If you don't mind could you check out mind, could you check out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/submission/220360/jelly_beans

New Version

I change the placement, the bear illo a little bit and Iput the text on the sleeve



any comments?



thanks

Hey!!! Wow!

This is the first time I see a sleeve in Threadless, and it looks great!

I'll suggest to make more soft the ears. I mean, the rest of the edges of the bear have little lines off, like the fur of the bear, and that looks fantastic. I suggest to do the same with the ears.

The presentation is great!

wow, thanks a lot, nice comments

i like the text on V2 alot better...

i would say make the nose a bit darker...and around the eyes and mouth aswell...



I like the rest! Ears look better than V1!



If you get the opportunity, check out my design and leave some feedback! :)

Pessimus Prime

Hello :)



Cute design

I like the text on V2 better as well



Please crit mine back!

yeah but, no many threadless design with text make it well here, right?

Well, text is cool when is necessary, i think in your disegn is necessary! Take a look to the catalog and you will see much tees with text!

See you!

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