This is just copied and pasted from a screen cap, since I am too lazy to put time into just a critique.

...which explains the stray lines and bounding box.

Mainly, I need help with the top segment that reads "Everybody".

I figure the biggest segment needs more attention, but how?

halp

im not going anywhere with this. This is just a global truth

why is this system so broken? Please don't just score and not comment

this is hopeless

bamp

buh!

make your everybody bigger, like how u did the pie. and whats with that blue % sign in the everybody segment?

just a bg...

i know i do!

new approach

anyone?

plox

hehe love the idea man! So much better then v1. Is it finished yet? Maybe some more detail?



If you have the time, please comment on my new submission!

I hope you will enjoy this design! Thnx!

i have no idea what to do

the critique system is so bad here.

Who puts flags on pie?

the french

i feel the 'everyone' could be bigger, depending on how big you want it to be on the shirt. also i'm not sure about the 'likes' type. why is the background brown? you could make it like its cut into the pastry maybe.

should i continue with v1 or v2?

the approach, not the quality

version 2 for sure, I think make the likes part the same colour as the pie (type I mean)

thanks