any comments before submit?

it looks a bit weird that he's right to the edge of the camels outline, if he was inside there should be some padding etc



also maybe adding a slight suggestion of the 4th front leg, right now looks like he just has one big front leg



aside from that its a cool design and also cool presentation

I reccommend moving his butt forward a little, because as it is, it looks like he's sitting on nothing. Otherwise, completely random and totally wonderful!

Good design. It took me a closer look to realize the tv is a tv. Maybe if it was on a little bit more of an angle? I agree with the comment about the 4th leg.

Yeah, make a fouth leg, and I agree with the tv. Fix this and your almost done

I you have the time, please vote for my submission

Some changes here,

I add the 4th leg, the tv, and I moved the guy inside the camel, It took me a while to doing it hehe,



two options here, I really want it to be simple as Option 2

any comments here?



Thanks all for the help =)

Hey, thats cool!

I like option 1 better, but I dont think that the black line is really necessary, the place he's in alreary have a darker color, how dows it look without the black line? what about making the that place even darker?





I'd really like to know your opinion about this

I kinda want to see option two, sans the black line. I think that could be really cool.

yeah, thanks, guys, I'm taking notes to sub a new Version

any other comment?



(what's "sans the black line")

Because at first I wanted to use the less colors posible (just white and black).



(thanks for the sans one)

Funny image! Go with option 1, and work on the shading so it really looks like the only light is coming from the TV. Also, try adding more grass under the camel's feet; doing the grass in black would look nice, I think.

thanks, any other, before I make the changes?

haha! nice one.. Option 1!

can i make the shadows come from the black color? or has to be more colors?

I fixed some things, option 1 or 2?

just BLACK AND WHITE on RED SHIRT



any comments?

gracias!

I like option 1. Option 2 isn't as defined and it looks like part of the guy's head is cut off.

I like the shadows on option 1 too.

OPtion 1 for me... please.

Nice work!!

then Option 1, go up?

Another vote for option 1 here! Sub sub! :))

The halftones look fine. I say option 1 and I say sub!

any other?

any?

option 1 for sure. this is funny.



Hit me back

hope last version..... any comments before submit?

The camel's back looks very "pointy", was this on purpose? I think real camels have it more rounded..



But I think it looks good, I like the lines like this



I'd appreciate some feedback

yep, there are pointy

welll some of the, are hehe,



I thinks I just gonna submit, to se what happens



thanks for all the nice comments guys =)

I think I have to agree: camelhumps may BE that pointy, but they still can look too point in a design.



I really dig what you've done inside the camel, though -- big time.



Maybe smaller, as far as placement goes? The camel's mouth is going to get lost in her armpit.



Edie, &c

yeah, thanks patrick

Very cool graphic, love the guy illo but I agree that the humps could be a bit less pointy. No one's going to miss that it's a camel though if you leave them the way they are. Cheers!

Yea, thats really up to you, I think its ready for sub



I'd appreciate some feedback

ok, I fixed the humps and placement



thanks for all the help here



now, ready to submit?

bump

any comment???

i like that you rounded the humps makes it more camely



help me out with my design

other?

yeah, thanks yunki, it really looks better like this