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wiladkins
wiladkins on Jul 06 '09
A simple idea. American sign language spelling out front and back!
fhigi25
fhigi25 on Jul 06 '09
nice. but what about putting color on it.
mismonaut
   mismonaut on Jul 06 '09
The "n" hand is weirdly proportioned.

It's a neat idea, though. You'll probably need a "hook" of some sort in order for it to score well.
Ricki Jane
Ricki Jane on Jul 06 '09
I like the idea. I'm wondering if you might want to add bottom lines to the hands on the back of the shirt to match the front?

Also, just a suggestion, but having "front" down the side of the front rather than centred. I'd need to see it to know tho :)

Please score my design:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/219225/Green_Eyes

And critique two designs if you have time! Thanks!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/47877/G_string
http://www.threadless.com/critique/47877/G_string
Ricki Jane
Ricki Jane on Jul 06 '09
Oops! For critiquing:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/48010/Cowpie
kirpid
kirpid on Jul 06 '09
either dump the shading or make the line more expressive.

I'd recommend George Bridgeman's "book of a hundred hands". I bought it for under a buck on amazon.
wiladkins
wiladkins on Jul 07 '09
cheers guys, i'll get to work on it as soon as i can.
JRW
JRW on Jul 07 '09
The outlines of hands and shadows are a little bit too grainy in my opinion. Maybe try to make it a bit smoother.
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Ars Fera
Ars Fera on Jul 12 '09
Interesting idea..
I think for starters that the hands on the back should have the outline on the bottom like the ones on the front do. It seems like an odd inconsistency..
And I agree with Mismonaut. Something needs to be done with this design to give it some oompf and to make it stand out against all of the other submissions.
Clever start though, this could be a sweet design :)
And if you're not too busy, a comment on my first submission would be much appreciated!
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