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v1 Girl Mind Design, current version








Work in progress by:
Nusha
on Jul 06 '09
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Nusha
Nusha on Jul 06 '09
everything ends with clouds in the head and...
arthurbath
arthurbath on Jul 07 '09
Oh, this one is gorgeous. I love girls!



All of the pieces are well composed. You might try some other colors. Blues tend to go well with browns, but these are not so complimentary here. Tai cyan le. Or try a different fabric color. Maybe some stars in the clouds. Maybe some more ruffling detail to the clouds. I think that they are the element that needs the most attention.



Would you criticize my Water Owl?
Giraffix
Giraffix on Jul 07 '09
Wow! Mad skills. I like it the way it is.



Please critique me too! Thanks!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47916/Muffin_Band
Aliloula
Aliloula on Jul 08 '09
Very cool design! I love it! Something bothers me about the girls hair though...kind of looks like a mullet. Also I would like to see a little more detail on the girl and lamp maybe in the blue? I would move the design down on the shirt, its a little too close to the neckline. Might like to see it on a different color shirt too?
Aliloula
Aliloula on Jul 08 '09
Would love some feedback on mine too :)
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