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I hope this will make you see toilet paper in a whole new way...
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I agree... A hand, especially a simple one, with only one color would look good reaching for the sheet. Also, on the inside of the toilet paper roll I think you should take out the scribble and put in a few lines to make it look like the cardboard is spiraled like in a real toilet paper roll. The only other thin is I would move the frown down some. It's a really awesome idea. Funny shirt.
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can't remember who it is but there is someone with a VERY similar design.... will try and remember and post a link
It is so close that you may need to go in a whole new direction....happened with my latest one too.....had to completely rethink it which is hard when you think you are on to something would appreciate your crit |
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Haha, very cool!!
I agree with Giraffix, but I think you could work a bit more on it... I'd appreciate some feedback |
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nice one!
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Itīs nice anyway.
Try to give a history or a message, something special to buy your tee. Change the sad face for a terror face...or something like that. If you donīt mind, check my design and give me your opinion, please. Thanks |
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I like the idea, but I'm not crazy about the execution. The end of the roll should look more torn, not wavy, and I agree with Giraffix on the cardboard. Tweak it a bit, and you'll get something.
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