Hello, I need some help here for a new titile.
I want to submit this for the Pre-Loved challenge
Thanks

not a bad idea but the bird is hard to see and i dont understand the blueprint type measurement effects you have going on.

maybe a possible title would be ummm "dainty infestation" haha idk

It´s nice compotition, but i haven´t any idea whats´s measn.I´m sorry.
But the blue looks like better, i know that,ahhahha...

could you help me with my design,please?

its just a bird trying to eat some gummy worms hehe

same version, I just clean it so you can see better
please any title suggestion?

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The Apple King
love the detail !

thats sounds nice, thanks
any other??

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Really cool, the only thing is that it's too horizontal and thus the T shirt looks a bit empty. But it's only my opinion and I already find this great!!!

Can you vote on my new design?

yeah, thanks, and what about the title?

Sorry I don't get it, but you know...I'm french ;D

well, its supposed to be a bird eating some gummy worms coming out from an apple, thats all

I don't see why this was rejected, but I'll give you some suggestions anyways.

The worms are inconsistently lit in relation to the apple.

Take advantage of the blue print graphics could actually say "gummy worms" or something clever. I can't read them so maybe you did. I would actually read them if I was to buy this shirt.

Experiment with placement. It is placed in a very typical area. You may find a way to really bring the design out. I can see threadless doesn't just want shirts with cool designs, they want designs that use the shirt as a canvas.

i know a great one..."CALCULATING TARGET"...how is that sound?