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Work in progress by:
Fiddich
on Jul 04 '09
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Fiddich
Fiddich on Jul 04 '09
Fiddich
Fiddich on Jul 04 '09
Is this submittable do you think? And what should I change?
Fiddich
Fiddich on Jul 04 '09
No comments at all? :(
Fiddich
Fiddich on Jul 04 '09
Pleaseeeeeeee
Kim456
Kim456 on Jul 04 '09
really don't like the filters you have used

colours are nice

needs a story rather than just being a bird on a shirt....something unexpected for it to be coming in to land on perhaps

would appreciate your comments
Giraffix
Giraffix on Jul 04 '09
I agree with Kim. I think you should sharpen it up some. maybe make it look more like he's either in flight or about to land to grab something. It's not the best pose for that bird. Thanks for critiquing mine.
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