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kedge
kedge on Jul 02 '09
i made some changes with my last creation, and become this new one. i didnt make too much changes in this word "love'.

hope you can realize my idea and like my creation.

thank you for your advice or suggestion.

Love is beyond words, We all need love.
dleeson2
dleeson2 on Jul 02 '09
I like trippy type set images based around love. I think you've got some good energy in this although the white backgrounf and We Are One wrench kinda take away from the zen like approach your letters give. I'd embrace the pink park of the image and see about working on making it larger to fill more of the screen and without a white back ground. See where it goes from there.



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hazzahart
hazzahart on Aug 01 '09
i think make it just text and the hearts. No white background. Possibly make it a bit bigger too. Cool though!
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