Good idea? pursue it?

haha i think it's funny.

thanks!

Colored and shaded one of them. I took the face off, I think I like it better without the face.

agree it looks better without the face
Nice halftones!

great concept!

are you a kiwi???



would appreciate your feedback

Both shaded and colored. Made em bigger. Probably gonna have thin some of the black lines on the Kiwi on the right

Clever. I like the halftones you used too. Have you got placement worked out yet?

Not yet. Gonna work on that next. Thanks!

hurhur... im not sure the pun would be too obvious without the title. but good job so far. i think u may have to work on the kiwis still. add seeds, maybe some juice dripping out. perhaps place them in front of a tv actually playing the wii instead of just holding the wiimotes?

Yeah I'm gonna play with different elements

im thinking it would look good on a dark green shirt?

help me with mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/47416/all_tied_up

Placement on a shirt with shadows

bump

i think this is a really weak pun at best. don't do it! :(

aw :`(

It won't hurt to submit it anyway :D

It wouldn't hurt, I guess. Truth be told, it probably wouldn't help either. I have to agree with Ginette on this.

Maybe do a kiwi as the nunchuck instead of kiwis with wiis instead?

I'm gonna be lazy :) I've got another idea for preloved that I wanna start on, so I'll probably let this one slide

I don't get the pun, I guess I am naiive :(

kiwi playing wii :) LOLZZZLZ

Threadless is made on weak puns, go for it

best of luck