If you need me to draw a picture, THIS is how I flow...

very nice!

just center it better

and make it bigger!



mind a commenting?

I love the concept. My only crit is the "f" and "l" of flow are too close and may read like an "A".





Please Crit Me

Thanks for the comments, evan3 and getza. I'll make some adjustments and repost.

If you need me to draw a picture, THIS is how I flow...

I think that overall it looks good.

Maybe I would move it even more to the left, and I would try to make the drawing bigger (Just the drawing, not the typo)

I think it looks really great, the illustration is really crisp and the idea is cute and funny. It just needs a little zing I think, don't be afraid to use the whole shirt I would say, it's a little tiny, and hard to get from a distance.

I just honestly don't get it. Sorry.

Looks good and reads well. If you think it's missing something, have you tried incorporating a design element that is the end result of the flow or something connecting the flow to give it a double meaning or complete the thought somehow (the mechanical vs the organic, someone using the turbine), or I don't know really. I like what you have. If you weren't to change anything I would suggest seeing it on a different t-shirt color.