Hello all. Work in Progress with a working title of "Universally Speaking". Music is a universal language and this design is a vinyl record becoming a word balloon. The center is also the sun with the planets displayed around it in hatch marks. Any and all feedback welcome. Thanks, Jorge

Anybody?

very cool

but have music notes also

maybe spelling out hello

in music

and add more color

looks neat!

and add an alien!



mind a commenting

agree^^^

make this design cleaner!

that could be the alien head seen from side:D

thx for comment

Great concept! I think the sun should be a brighter yellow, because right now it looks like an opening in the middle of the record because it matches the tee color. I'm also not sure if the little triangle thing near the top is necessary, even though the theme is speaking and it looks like it's supposed to make the record become a speech bubble. But if you are keeping the speech bubble look, I think the triangle should be coming from the bottom, not the top. But keep going, this could be great!

By the way, if you're not too busy, I would really appreciate some help!

o, sorry for leaving the link, didnt kno u critted mine lol, thanks!

I made the suggestion you gave me, thanks! This design is cool but I feel like it should be saying something. Maybe if the preview file included a look with the shirt actually on someone it would help.



What do you think of my latest design?

Very clever concept. I'm not sure about it being a word balloon as well though, I think if you focused it down to just the vinyl record (perhaps playing so that's it's more recognizable) with the solar system in it, it would be more cohesive and less scattered. I love the hand-drawn look.



If you get a chance please check out my critique here as well!

I love this idea. I agree with Comfortador that if you cut the word balloon and just focused on the vinyl aspect it would be cleaner. Maybe even put it on a simplistic turntable?



Anyways, the concept is really cool. Would you mind reviewing mine in return? Thanks!

I didn't get that it was a word bubble, so maybe adding a character at the bottom would get that idea across.

Cool, excellent comments by all. Revisions coming soon. Thanks everybody!

clever concept mate. If the design is refined a bit it'll make more sense. What about putting the needle across into the milky way? but in negative space so the yellow from tshirt comes through? maybe some black splats outside of the vinyl moving southwest sorta?



Can you please comment on my design again? Your feedback is important to me. Terra Micro

I got an idea while I looked at it and thought that it would be cool if you drew a vinyl recorder and then drew the universe system onto the LP?

Thanks for your critique I really appreciated it. I've made a new version go have a look :D

I haven't looked at this for quite some time. I forgot about it and just may revisit this and try some of these great suggestions.

Thanks krudtugle!