Hi!

This is my first. Still breaking in my new tablet. :)

It is not yet finished as color separation is not done.

No comments?

V clever but could look a little gross if you didn't know the title :)

it is a bit weird, maybe the drop should be smaller. and possibly to clue in someone who wouldnt know put little honey bees in the background or so. =]

i would suggest making the honey more golden and less green becasue currently the droplet doesn't look too appealing. Also maybe add a few bees or something to make sure the viewer understands what he or she looking at a bit more?

It's a good idea and wont need much more work to be ready for submission =)

Hope this helped...maybe you could crit. mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/47532/Betrayal

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47687/Vinyl_Beauty

Im a weird guy! :)

Maybe a hexsagonal beehive pattern i the background?

How about this?

The honey comb needs to blend in a bit more, it doesn't really match the mouth and the drip, but cool idea though. Like the Rocky Honey Picture show!

The colors are good. I agree that the honey comb does need to fit in better. Maybe put something else in there to indicate that it is honey.

If you have a hot second let me know what you think about my design?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47738/Swaggering

i agree the mouth and honey have a realistic feel to them whereas the honeycomb just seem to be illustrated maybe adding some of the darker brown color from the honey drip to the honeycomb to give it a similiar feel to the honey drip......



please help critique mine

Big Fun with a Big Wheel

I realy cant belive you hate my work so much.

If you wrote why i could do my next one more to your taste.

I would realy like to make something you would like to wear and feel good about it.

The honey panel needs to be work to looks like the rest of the picture.

The typo texture is perfect for the whole tee. Itīs my personal opinion.



If you donīt mind, check my design and give me your opinion, please. Thanks