new design, was originally planning to put the face on the shirt but think its looks pretty cool with out :P thoughts? suggestions??

Me like!

And I like the face there, too.

I would buy this for sure if it wasn't on a white t-shirt, I just don't wear them. The design has nice movement and good breaks with the eyes. I also really like how the design continues on front and back.

i love the line work, great style, i think i would like to see the design be more random. insteadof taking up the whole bottom like that have it empty in some places and maybe but a small portion up near the shoulder. i dont know if it will work its hard to say without seeing it.

personally i love white shirts but w/e, so if not white what colour would you suggest?

for the vintage look, anything brown-ish.. or sand maybe..

for trying a new look to it, black shirt with light blue purple
drawing..

good luck! :)

i like!

If you don't mind please take a look my design :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46993/Princess_and_the_Frog

Thx

nah..i like the white. unless you invert the colours so white on black? It looks great on the girl model, but on the back of that guy model, it looks like he's got a very very hairy back. haha

but awesome line work and its a $5 from me. i'd definitely buy this.

Thanks for your comments on my work. I'll work right on it

I'd love to see the face on the front of the shirt, it would help break up the tangles. Otherwise I like it a lot!

it's kinda creepy, but I like it. The only thing that I'm not really feeling is the empty space at the shoulders. Why not just make it a full wrap and cover every square inch of the shirt? That might be cool.

really nice work though, looking forward to the next version.

Very nice.

As a front print it's awesome. The design lends itself to a variety of color combos.

nice. i will agree to them try other pastel color shirt

The more I look at this, the more I think it would make an awesome print. I can see this framed and hanging on a wall in someones place.

wooooooo
creepy but sure will get all the attention i need wearing this :D !!

now tht u've drawn the bull-like creature head...r we expecting it anywhere on the tee too?

hmm print would b great for conversation starter too, in throwing after parties hehe ;)

any ideas to improve mine?

I would like to see it in color. Just not liking that black&white world. Bright color on pastel one. Complementary colors would be nice.

Some critiqe please!
Tastes like honey

I would like to see it in color. Just not liking that black&white world. Bright color on pastel one. Complementary colors would be nice.

Some critiqe please!
Tastes like honey

Wow! yea i think it looks best as is, don't put the head on it. its stunning. that detail looks like it took you forever. well done!!

thanks for the comments

Nice! agree with everyone on the colour. Maybe try inverting it (white on black)

If you've got the time score mine: Shepherds & Pre-loved

I think it will look grat on a cream/beige tee.

Could you please vote for my design

Wow, I love your work on lines.
As for the face, I agree with you that it will not look good on your design...maybe hide some teeth in the design to figure out the monter...

Can you vote for my design??

Your line work is fantastic. I love it as it is. IMO, with the head will add a more clear picture that this is a monster shirt. Without it, it is more of a simple design and can almost be seen as a floral print. Try covering the entire tee with the fur design, and place the head in the front, center slightly tilted. I'd like to see that.

I like it on white.

Would you check out a new one I have in critique. I will not write on my clothes.

added pattern to whole shirt so you can see what it looks like ill put a few new variations soon based on all your suggestion thanks for all the feed back :)

also, if you wouldn’t mind have a look at one of my designs give it a score id appreciate:) score me :)

I prefer previous v.

The contrast of empty t n ur design makes it look sick n cool, now it's just sick;)

comment/vote me y don't cha ;)

updated with a dash of colour, i uploaded a full pattern in vs 2 so you could see what it looks what do you think?

Doesn't Threadless have problems printing across seams? Other than that I think it's great, it stands up just fine without color if you ask me. Not something I'd wear (nothing against the design, I just don't like busy shirts), but I would get it as a print.

wow the red one looks so awesome! btw the head icon you have there, is it on the t-shirt?

Thanks for your comments on mine :)

i like very much the line work, and I think in red looks even better.
I like quite minimalist t-shirts but as bossbeard I'd like it as a print.

nice lines! Hmm Think I'd like it even more as an all over print..

i really like both, red and black
but yeah amazing

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47145/sleazy_pop#lastcomment

thanks luke

Yeaaahhh digging the red dood!

gorgeous.Both of them.

yo trevor..you submitting this design yet? Let me know when you do man.

If you have time, can you vote for my design?

do a 30 degree version. and sub it.
So it goes over 1 shoulder and the other not. Than it would be a print :D
can you crit mine?

like the the idea from breaky
but over all i like it

critique mine
hamster attack
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lions face
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