harvesting for winter. What do you all think?

haha, nice idea. great illustration, really nicely done. I'm not sure the illustration on the back is necessary, or instead i'd be tempted to have a huge pile of jelly beans on the back, just slightly wrapping round and spilling over onto the front?



Please return the favour and critique my design

I really like the illustration. very nicely done. I'm a little confused though as to what's happening with the tree. is it supposed to be ripping through the front of the shirt and coming out the back again? What if the trunk/vine just wrapped over the shoulder from front to back and then ended with the squirrel holding on for dear life? I dig the jelly bean on the back, but think it should be more in scale with the ones from the front as far as it's size is concerned. The way it looks now, it's bigger than the squirrels head. :D



I'm interested in seeing how this progresses. Good luck.



If you have a chance I'd love some feedback on the following.

In The Weeds

& maybe a vote for

Someone Loved Them Once



Thanks

MADE SOME REVISIONS. What do you all think?

harvesting for winter. What do you all think?

I think that I like the first version the most. Maybe going over the shoulder is a bit too much??

thats what i was thinking. could they even make a shirt like this? thanks!

any other feed back?

I decided to go back to my original layout, and changed some things, I am much happier with this!!! What do you all think? I would appreciate the feed back, Thanks!!!

I love the illustration, but I don't think you should have anything on the back at all.

The squirrel on the back didn't sit well with me, so i think this is the final version, and im going to submit it!

ready to go!!

The squirrel on the back didn't sit well with me, so i think this is the final version, and im going to submit it!

final?

final.

final.

harvesting for winter. What do you all think?

Brilliant illustration! Love the idea to! Have you thought of putting it in the bottom right hand corner then the bit that you were going on the the back (maybe more) going in and out towards the top left? just an idea.

submit now dudw :) this is awesome :)

at the top of the tree looks like rare.

maybe if you put some jelly beans jumping or somethink like that.



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Excellent illustration. What if the design started on the bottom left of the shirt and broke through (like on the original back) a couple times on its way to the left chest area where it ended in tips of the vine coming through?

the tree looks kinda sick with the jelly beans in it...i likeeee!



check out my lion ;) !

I can't figure out how to make it stay when you click on the buttons! :(

this is my first swf and i can't figure out how to make it stay on the image when you click on it. you'll see. :(

this is my first swf and i can't figure out how to make it stay on the image when you click on it. you'll see. :(

this is my first swf and i can't figure out how to make it stay on the image when you click on it. you'll see. :(

finally got a bug out! still dont know how to make it stay. :(

harvesting for winter. What do you all think?

harvesting for winter. What do you all think?

harvesting for winter. What do you all think?

harvesting for winter. What do you all think?

harvesting for winter. What do you all think?

harvesting for winter. What do you all think?

harvesting for winter. What do you all think?

Oooo I totally forgot this design man, I love it! Nice illustration and idea. But I don't like the light blue tee. Maybe green?



If you have the time, please comment on my new submission!

I hope you will enjoy this design! Thnx!

Nice, maybe just have a slightly clearly delineation between the stem(s) and the leaves growing out of them though? Maybe even just a slight change in colour between the two, i dunno, just a thought...

My design is up for voting, could you guys vote for it?